I'm glad Shadow didn't go for her right away. I wonder how long Aurora can keep Shadow in the dark? What happened to the guy that wanted foals with her? That is why she wanted Autta in the first place. And how come I think that what Nightmare Moon is doing is going to blow up in her face? I did say NMM AND Luna had to get him back. Right now, it just NMM.
Once again, not dissing on the fic, but there seems to be too much rushing here. I like how this is going, but you really need to do more with detail, and I don't mean the sex. The clop scene was pretty good. Found nothing out of place. Feel free to ignore me if you want. I'll probably keep reading anyway.
I what to say shit about to hit the fan but we are way past that all say for shadow is to bend over and grab your ankles
My interest in this story is sky rocketing. I can't wait for the next update and I am glad Shadow used his head on his shoulders.
I'm glad Shadow didn't go for her right away. I wonder how long Aurora can keep Shadow in the dark? What happened to the guy that wanted foals with her? That is why she wanted Autta in the first place. And how come I think that what Nightmare Moon is doing is going to blow up in her face? I did say NMM AND Luna had to get him back. Right now, it just NMM.
4670573 Things do look dark for Shadow but...it may not be bad :3
4672842 Hehe, he's not your typical clop protagonist that thinks with his southern head :D
Once again, not dissing on the fic, but there seems to be too much rushing here. I like how this is going, but you really need to do more with detail, and I don't mean the sex. The clop scene was pretty good. Found nothing out of place. Feel free to ignore me if you want. I'll probably keep reading anyway.
Not a bad story, but abbreviations are getting to me. Such as thru, nmm, and such. Especially when used in dialogue.