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Akeion98


Just a guy that likes cooking,writing,talking politics,mysteries and of course ponies.

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What in Luna's name have I done!? · 8:29pm Dec 10th, 2017

I'm definitely rewriting the first chapter to this story. I have no idea what past me was doing and now that I've gotten more practice writing,I know I can do better!

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Thank you for the Favorite!

Thanks a lot for the follow!

Thanks for the praise on my story.

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I like the dialogue, it's very raw and plausible. But the pacing throws me off a bit maybe you should slow it down a bit. Give it some deep interactions between Luna and Dusk to make a bit more natural.

Thanks for the favorite on the Anthro Luna story! What do you like so far about it?

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