They came as conquerors...but they will leave as something new. Bonds will be formed in the occupied Crystal Empire, love will blossom, and secrets long-buried will be uncovered.
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That abdomen, eh Chryssy?
On a separate note, great characterization of Chrysalis and her lost idealism, it's very believable and makes me want to hug her... you know, provided she doesn't decide to open her mouth and drool acid on me.
And I'm guessing that, based on this story's description, Chickit is going to be the antagonist!
I love this story, eager to see more. By any chance do you have an ETA on the next chapter?
4865758 Not at the moment, I'm afraid. All depends on how wild work gets
On the one hand, the villain is too easily presented. On the other, you didn't bother hiding him so I can't really blame you.
And a "Charlie Wilson's War" reference? Never expected to see that.
4868457 I CAN'T BELIEVE SOMEBODY FREAKIN' SAW THAT! You sir, get a mustache.
Hell, have five.
Oh my god another chapter yes awesome
I was on the fence a bit with the first few chapters, but the characters were so good that I gave you the benefit of the doubt. Despite the lack of chapters available, this is quickly becoming one of my favorite fics I've read so far.
Keep up the good work man.
4869680 Will try
Hm. This chapter was a total clichés... but a good one.
However, I felt the chapter was a little to serious than usual, I miss all the silliness and your trademark humor. Nevertheless I do understand that it had to be their, just for the sake of plot.
P.S. Naughty, naughty Chryssy! I wonder, if my superior is also staring at my butt when I'm leaving a room?
4899882 LOL, I know, but Chrysalis in this story is a bit of a tragic character. I thought my humor wouldn't really fit all that well.
4900640 And tear-jerking she is. Cute little changeling with bright eyes. But can't see any real tragedy. for now.
4901116 For now
Poor Chryssie, life beat the idealism out of her. D:
I have that weird feeling that the general will betray Chryssy, and i have no idea where did that feeling come from...