Other than a few grammatical errors that you apparently fixed, I believe you have done a great job sir!

363454 Yeah, I have a habit of capitalizing words when I don't mean to. And I always try to do my best.

364200 I found a their instead of there, look for it after I refresh the page:

"Oh, now it says 'there'. Preemptive corrections rule."

Nice story thus far, should be interesting to see how a zebra steel ranger goes over.

366126 My thoughts exactly. I've been doing my homework on Zebras and I think I know how I want to characterize Crosshair too.

Crosshair doesn't rhyme...Huh.
Anyways, good chapter.
(Note to self, bring along rocks when going into dangerous territory.)

395719 Yeah Zebra's don't need to rhyme in Fallout Equestria. Plus always trying to rhyme is a bit of a pain

Knight Cross will someday be known as Star Paladin Cross.
I'm calling it now. Right here.
In this post.
2036 hours, July 18, 2012.

Because, get it? Star Paladin Cross?

933499 Ha ha, I have no idea what you mean. iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/twil.gif?1312762859

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IW is a member of the Steel Rangers and knows Power Armor like the back of his hoof. He already knows how to use it, he just doesn't get to use it as often as other Steel Rangers. Besides he has to know how Power Armor works, he repairs and maintains the Steel Ranger equipment and machinery as part of his position within the order. Also why would you assume Unicorns don't know how to use and wear power armor? Yes they mostly handle research, maintenance and civilian duties, but it isn't unheard of for unicorns to wear Power armor.

A good example is Cottage Cheese from the main FOE, who had to sever his horn to wear the helmet. Inkwell decided to hell with that and just goes and drills a hole for his horn, heedless of the potential consequences, like malfunctions, exposure to elements etc.