Sorry for the guys for the girly info in the beginning...
Please do skip it if you'd like... YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
(By this I mean in chapter 6)

Discord would make the most awsome boss.

That was pretty funny. Here take this!

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Thank you

Several mistakes:
Used 'your' instead of 'you're' when Discord yelled at the CMC
Used 'to' instead of 'too' a couple of times
Used wrong their/there/they're several times

A couple of others. Try to edit just a little harder, please,

3903508 Yes, it does very much! The only thing is, some just want it to be story, story, story But, I am not sure ther'll be any clop after this chapter...Maybe a bonus in the end?

I very much so love this chapter. I especially love the total smackdown SB gives DT. Like for serious, DT, STEP AWAY FROM THE OVEN BECAUSE YOU JUST GOT BUUUUUURRRRRRNED!

This is truly special.

3903895 I am so sorry but does DT mean Discord? and does SB mean Sweetie Belle?

3903908 SB= Sweetie Belle, DT= Diamond Tiara

3903913 Oh yeah!

Love this story
Make some, or one, of the mane six disapprove. I can't see Celestia disapprove really... she was the one who wanted Discord reformed and given a chance at a normal life anyway.

I see what you did there with the mug in the picture. Clever Clever.

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I know right? Thanks for the like and read!

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Well, I don't think Fluttershy or Rarity would disapprove...I'm sure Pinkie wouldn't mind either! Ponies like Rainbow Dash, and Applejack wouldn't aproove Another example...say spike, -sigh- It would be hard on him.

Why do I have a habit of reading things I like too quickly?

On a random note, If I was to somehow end up in Equestria, I'd try my damnedest to arrive as a Draconequus. Because CHAOS!!!!!

3908414 Sorry about this

TWILIGHT AND SPIKE? DUDEEEE THAT'S SO...SO....PECULIAR!
Like, why do you like that? That's so weird...

3893015 Btw, I love your work...I hope you liked my story!

3902690 okay... I'm rewriting the whole chapter. I am a very young writer and have been only doing this for so long. I learn by reading novels and other stories. To be honest, I never even pay attention in English class. That makes up for all the stupid mistakes I make. But for story, all I can say is that I have gotten to high life and I don't have any good story that evolves life lesson or sadness or love or emotion. I just I am really not that good. Sorry for being so machine gunny and stuff. I am really not that good at all What I am saying is that I never had any experience and am not that good in story or grammar

Hah, that's one funny note :D

I'm off to watch Ted guys, don't tell anybody...

Well, this seems pretty good. Okay, I'll do a reading of some of the chapters. I'll start as soon as I get time. I have a Derpy Hooves X Skyrim Part One animation to release before this month is over, so when that's out of the way, I'll happily do that reading for you.

Take care, new friend! I'll fave the story so I'm less likely to forget. XD

3913013 Oh my g! Thanks so much bro! Here take this!
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3913083 the moment I saw Rarity coming towards me I fudging freaked out. XD Damn mustaches!

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That IS kinda scary!

I love these pictures. Where do you find them?

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Hello, fancy seeing your comment here! So, your a twicord shipper?

Should I warn Twidash? xD

"In order to keep your period hidden, it is most suggested that you wear what is called a tampon," Cheerlie said--knowing she'd regret it in a minute.
"Does it have to be real? Mrs. Cheerlie? Because, I don't think Tiara's is," Sweetie Belle asked with most innocence.