Twilight Sparkle, once a sweet happy child was bullied, she let the anger and pain fester until an accident happened, a few years later she turned to violence and crime, what happens when the famed assassin Dark Star is tasked with being a body guard
3707254 Wait till chapter three it will ALL be explained. Some shared their points of dislike about RD being a bully but I stress the point that I myself really like RD. In chapter three is the confrontation and the something to the something that will get Twilight to meet RD again, nough said I ain't giving spoilers haha.
so how long do you think it will be till the next chapter? an will it be this long again? because while i like long chapters, cutting the chapter length in half so that we have more frequent updates is perfectly acceptable.
3707734 It is debatable, depending on how my family does New years toady I will probably start tomorrow and as for length of the chapter, cutting them to size can be done, this chapter though was about example and then start story so it ended up being a pretty long one, expect an update between now and friday at latest if I can get some me time to write
Well I really like this story and I can't wait for the confrontation. Though I wonder if Cadence will have been replaced or not in the next chapter, since she seemed perfectly normal atm. Though it could just be that you decided they had better information and were able to easier copy her mannerisms.
Twilight was a little nervous. She hadn't been nervous in many years but it was a really big threat of her identity being discovered. If it was, she would be taken out by the Association because she could be used by enemies threatening her family from her past life. Twilight followed Cadence up until the door and said that she would wait there. After a couple of minute she opened the door so it was ajar slightly and heard the conversation.
man yo family disowned you how you gon’ let someone use em as bait also the pink one knows too much move to assassinate ok how’d Twi end up giving in to AJ and get found out by at least 3 ppl ok Twi hitlist gonna be big now all the ppl who know who she is
9151064 Why do you think I don`t like Pinkie Pie so much. Their is literally no way she could know thats Twilight. And don`t say its pinkie just being pinkie.
Wait Rainbow... a bully? Nah.... really?
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Wait till chapter three it will ALL be explained. Some shared their points of dislike about RD being a bully but I stress the point that I myself really like RD. In chapter three is the confrontation and the something to the something that will get Twilight to meet RD again, nough said I ain't giving spoilers haha.
3707258 Thanks.
3707282 No worries, sorry for making you confused, I hope it has been okay so far
3707287 It's kicking ass.
so how long do you think it will be till the next chapter? an will it be this long again? because while i like long chapters, cutting the chapter length in half so that we have more frequent updates is perfectly acceptable.
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It is debatable, depending on how my family does New years toady I will probably start tomorrow and as for length of the chapter, cutting them to size can be done, this chapter though was about example and then start story so it ended up being a pretty long one, expect an update between now and friday at latest if I can get some me time to write
"Smashing,"
Whenever I see that I always remember is Nigel
Well I really like this story and I can't wait for the confrontation. Though I wonder if Cadence will have been replaced or not in the next chapter, since she seemed perfectly normal atm. Though it could just be that you decided they had better information and were able to easier copy her mannerisms.
3708329 YES!! someone picked it up hahaha OH I say.
3710167 HEE. HEE. HEE. slow laughter has ended
Aaaagggghhhh!!! Whebn will chapter 3 come out!? Cant stand waiting >.<
this is the best story i read so far
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I love all you guys, thank you so much, I will have chapter three out soon
This is going to be forgiveness bullshit despite the betrayals in which you can shove it up your ass, I'm out.
And apple jack failed to keep sensitive info yet again
man yo family disowned you how you gon’ let someone use em as bait also the pink one knows too much move to assassinate ok how’d Twi end up giving in to AJ and get found out by at least 3 ppl ok Twi hitlist gonna be big now all the ppl who know who she is
9151064
Why do you think I don`t like Pinkie Pie so much. Their is literally no way she could know thats Twilight. And don`t say its pinkie just being pinkie.