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Hmm, should I be petty and keep my wall of text to myself?

Naw I'm better then that.

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So much going on here and the pacing felt nice not too fast or too slow.

So we finaly get to see them depart from Canterlot, and during said trip find out just what happens when Mrolinth gets a bee in her bonnet. Still got to give Blossom credit for having the moxie to stand up to such a creture much less attempte to chew it out for basicly tricking Dee dee into being it's host. Props to dee dee for being able to once again force it back as well.

Trottingham, I'm getting something of a chicago vibe from it though I'm not sure why. Also Talk about luck first find not only a letch of a cab driver who got what was coming to him for his vile acts but also a hotle deskclerk who made the wrong jokes at the wrong time. Poor Blossom having to be reminded of what happened to her so soon aftword and in such a blatent manner. Still she's got dee dee by her side.

Speaking of dee dee, I know she's young and somewhat reckless but well I think she's going to get them both into a world of trouble in a moment. Still it'll almost be worth it to see the look on Trixie's face when a none unicorn filly curbstomps six guards right infront of her face. the only way this could be better is if trixie tried to challenge twilight to a magic duel infront of all of Canterlot.

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Well......fuck this was awesome Dee gona kick some serious flank.
Peppy what is it with you and creating adorable weapons of mass destruction?
Also that reminds me, the only way this could be better was if Dee and Moonbeam teamed up and went to town on an army of griffins.

P.S Is Trixi being recruited for the Royal Guard or Lunar army?

Jesus Christ Peppy!!! another one!!! okay here it comes...

You biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiip bastard!!! And your biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiip cliffhangers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS: you are evil and that's why we like you

476796 Lunar Army.

477112Oh thanks

477183 Can check ATFN for armor colors. RG is gold and Lunar is silver.

Should've killed that dude. To me rape is just as bad, if not worse, than murder.

Anyway...

DAT CLIFFHANGER!

479966 i dont think dazzle cares either way. and remember that both sides are the cause of her parents death and she hasn't forgotten it also she's still not that educated of a filly so she probably assumes the lunar soldiars are just like the royal guard so the situation is probably already way out of hand already and with that muahaha let the slaughter commence! tho honestly i do like the lunar soldiars and dont wish them to die but its a little filly slaughtering an entire company of soldiars so i'm gonna see it wheather i like it or not.

hay peppy at current point in the story how long till the royal guards ill fated strike against nightmaremoon? and lichpony is bestest pony.
"please make a lichpony guardian for dazzle and dee dee": img1.pcgames.com.cn/pcgames/1007/08/1946746_2a05c0269f2311378b82a1c8.jpg
Xaldon you know necromancy is a bad practice
*timidly* 'i know proffesor sparkle ist just neicromancers are awsome allies and...'
no buts now stop trying to cast it and help me finish todays experiments
yes ma'me.

By the Starry Mane of Queen Moon why must you torture us Peppy? what with the slow (But worth the wait) updates on ATFN, and now this amazing fic..... I might as well join the Lunar army right now so I can have something to do other than fidget while you work.... I wonder if they take gamers

492680 The slow on ATFN is now due to alternating between it and this (plus whatever previous chapter revisions I make.

And yes. If you can move your limbs, then they'll take ya.

So wait, why is Dazzle attacking the Lunar Guards? I thought it was the Solar Guards that killed her parents? Is she just kind of generalizing anyone in guard armor = bad, or did I totally miss something major along the line?

493129 She was upset. Wasn't paying attention to who killed her parents other than the fact that they were in armor. She heard her parents talking about Nightmare Moon's Lunar Army the night before. She assumes that it was the Lunar Guards that did it, so yeah.

Gotcha. I figured she was just generalizing, but I just wanted to make sure I hadn't missed something important .

And since I haven't said it yet: screw your cliffahngers! In this and your other story! .

493228 Bwahaha!

492748 Alright well my creator says they want to draw fanart of Dee Dee sometime, as for me off to the recruiting station!

I read and read...but now I regret it. Where's the 'next chapter' button?

501223 It's still new as compared to ATFN. I can only update both so fast, unfortunately.

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Well, I can only fave this once... but in my mind, I've favorited this fifty times already. Me likes. Me likes lots.

501260 Good. Gooooooood. Now all I need to do it figure out how to make it possible for multiple votes and there'll be instant profit!

peppy you inglorious basterd who taught you how to troll so well?

heck id wouldn't be surprised trixie get over the imminent rape of 6 guards right around her and try to pry into dee-dee's origins of flank kickery...........you know.....to *cough* better *cough* her great and powerful powers lol.....................

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Indeed we do! We'll take anypony from casual gamers to advanced RTS and FPS experienced ponies! Your above average hoof-eye coordination, coupled with the intense fasting training you've undoubtedly put yourself through on the long nights of "Game and Watch" will be most useful in a surprise/ambush situation! You'll be right there on the front lines, defending the Highest honor of Her Majesty and your fellow ponies.

And let's face it: Fillies DIG the Uniforms.

Signed:
-Brigadier General Dream Weaver-
=Commander of the 51st Special Operations Pegasi Unit, Station Trotsdale=

556916 I'm good at micromanaging units in rts games, even better if I have my little golem tiny with me...
As for fillies digging the uniform I am so digging that, ladies my body is ready

*whistle* That be one mighty fine drop down there... Now, how do we get down *spies countdown to next chapter* Guess I gotta wait for it.

On a side note, 556916 I wonder, I can swing a sword like Riven. Do I qualify, and the pay better be good. Also, won't need armor, I'm the main character, yo.

590688

That all depends. We must see you in action first. As for being the main character: this storyline holds no guarantees.

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Hmmmm... Still seems like a lucrative job...

688932 It's the best.

"Why do you talk so funny? It's so [ird!" I smiled and tilted my head as I awaited her answer. Was that supposed to be a weird?

802011 Probably. Lemme go find that >.>

So... next chapter when?

811078 Whenever what I'm working on now is finished. Shouldn't be too long. Had hit a block on this though.

Nice, only a few metters into the city and one of em gets almost raped, i guess the sex tag will appear soon...

1173374 There won't be any rape, that's for sure, but there will be sex. I could have swore the tag was already there, though....