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But... But...
DUN DUN DUUUUUUN
But really, I love this story. Keep up the good work!
WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
WAT
WHAT??
Bah its a dream. THat much is obvious, Pinkies dead and everyone knows it...Unless this is like Fontaine from Bioshock! OH Dear GOD RUN APPLEJACK!
Pure awesomeness as always.
And that cliff hanger! HNNNNNG!!!
Ooohhh... ...fuck. I can't look...
406864 Pinkie's ghost? anyway this is great Mr.Author Person who i have read the name of but have not remembered and cannot be bothered to just go to the top of the page, keep on going and CLIFFHANGER *insert evil laugh here*
:O
Oh. Oh dear.
True evil never dies. It just...goes away. And like all things unwanted...It will return.
Oh, this is really gonna be good!
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Just the reactions I was hoping for!
Well this won't end well, not at all
407931 I'm glad it is!
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Good, because I was like "HOOOOOOOOLY FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUU-"
*eagerly awaits next chapter*
I have an idea of what happened & is going to happen...
GREAT SCOTT!
Holy shit.....HOLY SHIT!
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Was going to say the same damn thing
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I doubt it. You're just jelly of my sweet line.
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I was going to say something like, "Pinkie Pie may be gone, but the evil of Pinkamena never dies" or something like that
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A LIKELY STORY!
It appears even being dead/in the afterlife doesn't prevent Pinkie from breaking the laws of the universe...shit.
Saw it coming
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You monster let pinkie rest, she didn't mean the stuff she did!
Please! I just can't deal with pinkie being used to cause pain!
Still enjoying the story keep writing... and yeah i think the line everyone was looking for was Laughter never dies
Once again, you've got me curious...Keep it up!
OH MY CELESTIA WHAT THE FUCK!? everything else I planned on saying dissappeared when I read the last line.
And I said it HAD to be Applebloom, she's the one Pinkie sang the cucakes song to.
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What about Applebloom?
Lol,you really like the word bigot don't you?
*Reads the end*
WHAT A
So we have the whole situation of Dash having to deal with her past,AND Pinkie's ghost?Looks like we're in for a long ride.Fine by me,can't wait for the next chapter.
She needs to be the next cupcake killer.
Well , since it is an alternate ending of Cupcakes , and its not even close for an end , so i assume its a dream . Or a ghost ?
Well , we will find out ( hopefully soon )
PS : Thanks @milesprower06 for this cliffhanger .
I can't sleep because of it .
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Sorry, Skittles. I do not consider the extended ending with Applebloom canon in the Chronicles. She is not involved at all in the killings.
Apart from the medical atrocities committed in the writing, it was a very interesting read. But some things do stand out; she can't buck trees but she's allowed to run a marathon? I know that there are screaming differences between the two, but running a marathon like The Running of the Leaves isn't exactly a piece of cake.
The writing isn't flat, but still devoid of details on some parts (and overly detailed in others that don't need it). The plot is awfully rushed and sometimes "nonsensical" to the point of Deus Ex Machina. I mean- suddenly, every golden opportunity is thrown at Rainbow Dash and, to me, this sound like emotional manipulation towards the readers than actual pathos.
Usually, references to other stories and fanon material is frowned upon; but you used most of them for comedic relief, so I'll let that pass.
The characterization was a bit flawed at some points. I'd expect Rainbow to be more resilient and frustrated towards her inability to perform chores/physical exercise. AJ isn't as stubborn as the canon shows her to be as well. Something that bother me, though, is the fact that RD is all "I'm alright" just after the incident. Sure, she gets nightmares, but damn- she looked into death's eyes! She would be forever changed.
Well, I know it is your story and you might do what you please with it, but the shipping also seemed like a Deus Ex for further chapters. No me gusta.
I noticed, this chapter kind of made that impossible. But it would have been an AMAZING twihst.
but...but...derp! AWESOME!
PLEASE DON'T PULL A "What IF?"(another Appledash story, if you don't know it...Wait, It's so much more than that.)
did rainbow dash loose her wing let me guess yes she did.
433507 I thought that was quite clear in A Precious Rainbow.
Why can't Marty just learn to love and tolerate?
This story has some great plot twists, and it somehow pulled off +a
sex scene -without being overly cloppy
and the pinkie cliffhanger....
437340 Thanks. That was the goal.
And it will likely be the last one I do. I'd like to develop other areas of pony fiction other than clop, lol.
i can't wait for the next chapter
I knew it was coming. The second Lyras harp came up, I knew it was coming. And you still got me you magnificent bastard
Daaaaamn, what a time to get caught up. I'm on the edge of my seat, sir. Don't let me fall!
In my opinion, this saga is the best thing to come out of Cupcakes since before it was written. It turns a story of gore and death into one of healing, hope, recovery, and friendship. I read the entire contents of your DA page in one night, and was thrilled when I found that there was more here. I love the cliffhanger ending of this episode, and eagerly await the next one. (Actually, I kind of wish I'd found this page later on so I woudn't have to wait.)
With all that said, I do have some criticism. Most things are simply stated, with not much flavor text. Descriptive language makes everything come alive in a story.
I was also disappointed with the turn the story took at "Confessions of Love." I'm okay with shipping, especially when it's well done and you understand where each character is coming from. While I feel that love is beautiful, that still doesn't mean I want to come across it by accident. I'll be honest: whenever they start having sex, I'm scrolling down to where they're not.
Rainbow's resiliency is kind of stretching my suspension of disbelief as well. She was just tortured to the brink of death by one of her best friends. In my mind, that's just not something that goes away overnight, or even over a course of several months. This kind of stuff would screw up anyone's mental health for years. Yet here we have our good old Dash, running marathons, bucking apples, and getting the girl in around a month's time.
All in all, I love this work. I'll continue to read it as long as you write it. It is actually the first fim-fic that I truly am staying up and checking for an update.
More please?
Why is the fact that she is back a surprise to everyone? I figured out that she was back when Lyra's lyre was playing itself.
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In nearly all of the Appledash stories I've read that involve the Apple family, Granny has been okay with it or neutral.
I just read about lesbian pony porn. For 10 minutes. Without realizing it for 7.
FINALLY!
I was worried that this story was turning into a relationship drama, but DAT ENDING!