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Ah, I can't stand wing dismemberment...
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If you don't like it then don't click on it.
Embrace all of it or bog off.
Good day.
For some reason this interests me will track, will read.
Hmmm, I remember reading 'A Precious Rainbow' and deciding it was the best alternate ending of 'Cupcakes.' Really loved it actually.
Defiantly going to give the rest of it a read.
On another note, I don't see why people see 'Cupcakes' so negatively. To be honest, there's worse stuff out there and, besides it makes an interesting read.
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Agreed, I read cupcakes and it wasn't that bad. I've seen much much worse on this website alone that IMO beats cupcakes in the creepy category. Although it was pretty terrible, and I felt worse watching the animated version. Great now I'm going to be sick, now I have to go listen to Pinkie sing about smiles.
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It's truly a shame that Equestria Daily caters to people like you. It really is.
Freakey i was literally thinking no less that 2 hours ago "Hmmmm, i really want to read that one cupcakes fic......" and here it is all re uploaded
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Lolnope.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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I detect Mad...
DELICIOUS BUTT HURTEDNESS...
Cheer
~iraqlobstah
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Pfft. If I was mad I'd be deleting your comments up and down. You're a troll, not a Brony. I don't get mad at trolls.
302300 ive never heard of that alt ending?
302397 for future reffrance,there is a block feature
302459 Oh no worries, already done. I simply humored him for a few posts to determine if he was a disgruntled Brony or a troll. I got my answer.
I just got done reading the first and second bits and it was very nice! It felt very warming to see this ending, and I think the explanation you gave for AJ's rescue is great! I will continue to read more.
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It's above you, first 4 chapters, 'A Precious Rainbow' o.O
302483 Hope you enjoy it!
I love this story! I'm really glad that you've continued it for as long as you have. I was really excited to find that you had written more after reading "A Precious Rainbow" several times. (I still reread parts if it )
Keep up the great work; I'm loving the latest installment!
302646 i assumed you were talking about one of the original 8 alt endings to cupcakes :P
sorry if that made you even more confused
I'm actually writing my own extended cupcakes fic right now. I'm so checking this out for inspiration (not not idea plagiarism)
I loved every single installment of TCC so thanks for giving me an excuse to read them all over again...not that I needed one of course
WHY do people say cupcakes was bad? theres worse thing out there like cheerilees garden and rocket to insanity and sweet apple massacre
I love the story but WHY'S THERE SO MUCH FUCKING SEX
2011118 Thank You!
Just saying, but making love to a new partner, right after she realized all of this evidence of Pinke, and passing, doesn't seem like the right time to do it. But, you know, my opinion.
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= DOES NOT APROVE
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Emotional trauma and physical threat can cause odd reactions, it is, in principle, a mood-swing from one end of a spectrum to another.
Fear to arousal.
Just like when you can inadvertently smile when recounting something that horrified you.
486501 are they well writing?
This was not a good idea to read at midnight.
This is super scary and I should probably sleep now.
It's not so scary now because there's a moth on my wall
His name is Jeffrey.
Curse you Applejack! It was always Rainbow and Pinkie!
4691529 ok i see this for the 4 journal parts, but this (while exilerating in ER way) i don't see the "scary" in this part. its back to slice-of-life again.
"She was comfortable with putting the blame entirely on the friend she once knew." applejacks a bitch
5022452 can you really blame here though? Not even considering the brutality, if what pinkie did wasn't a complete betrayal, it was pretty damn close, from AJ's perspective at least
I
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Well writing?
If you mean well written? Well:
Sweet Apple Massacre is, but is a massive AU. With tons of back history that separates it from the Main Universe. And is Gorn as fuck. Like massive soul fucking with a rusty knife amounts of Gorn. (Pardon the language but if you read it, you'll see.)
(Oops! I was thinking of Apple Corruption before it was re-named had a similar name.
Sweet Apple Massacre's when I looked it up and remembered it. It sucks a billion times worse than Cheerilee's Garden.)
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Rocket to Insanity, and the fics that follow it ... I like the alt endings. But past that Oh my Daum. Better than Cupcakes, but at the same time so much more sad. A part of me would love to see Miles' make a fic on that. But as is. It's not too bad, is a spin off of Cupcakes, and is just ... utterly tragic. That devolves into an insane mind fuckery, feels stabbing, mess as the series progresses.
That is if you can still find them. They, like Cupcakes are insanely hard to find. Even if the drivel that are their spin offs are easy to find.
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-rocket-to-insanity.html
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Cheerilee's Garden and it's sequel suck.
It's not the grammar that's horrible. Rather it's beyond Sweet Apple Massacre's level of Gorn, but without the backstory and world building to make it make sense. Cheers is an OC in a Character's body. Cheers is also a Marey Sue, Overpowered, the sequel makes 0 sense with how it went about things, and even less with how it ended. Took 0 effort into giving emotional investment, and all it was was a super flimsy, and super poorly written excuse to get Cheers to kill people.
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I hope that answers your question.