YES! I've been so excited for this! Only a few grammatical errors that I saw (Like I think you needed an "s" somewhere). I like how you portray Applejack in this scenario, you write her well. I can't wait for more!
Incidentally, it always seems like stories (and I use the term loosely here) that require some sort of attempt at a disclaimer give off this conflicting "don't you DARE troll me/please stripmine me for lols' sort of vibe. What most trolls fail to realize however is there is no need to troll for loos here when they can all be had with a quick skimming through of the written cornucopia of laughs offered. That being said though, you do need to possess a rather morbid sense of humor for things like this. I'm also using this story as a reference when bronies try to claim that bronys and curries are not one and the same. Keep up the good work mate!
I often feel sad for stories of this "theme".... Usually, the like to dislike ratio is pretty matched and, looking through your other stories' you appear to be quite the writer. You kind of have to wonder how many of those dislikes read the story first, then judged it, and how many just see the word "diapers" and instant dislike and leave..... Usually, I get iffy about reading stories with such amount of "hate" but for these types I generally have to guess... But, I think I'll give it a read, and I don't have many doubts that it'll be good
Sweet, I loved your Post-Cupcake stories and I love AF stories. This doesn't deserve so many dislikes though. It's well written, goes into the psychology of the fetish, and it's not just clopclopclopclop. Can't wait for more!
I allways liked stories like this that go into kinks/fetishes and why someone (or somepony) have them. But also how it affects their life, from the hard part of coming out to the struggles they go through and the inner turmoil it can create. So with a theme at hand I certainly see a lot of potential and I can clearly say i'm looking forward to see where it goes.
This is what I would call infantilism done tastefully. Even though it's about a fetish topic, it's not presented in a fetishy manner so to say. Usually when I read stories that have to do with it, I never expect that much depth or thought, just the fetish and some seductive writing. But to actually have a nice story to go with it, is a good thing.
a good concept but too rushed. I think that the part that Applejack got her answer straight away was a little too hasty. Also maybe some reluctance on the part of the shopkeeper would have looked nice.
Boy you work fast!
Hope to see another one soon
Not bad.
I think the pacing's a little too fast though.
YES! I've been so excited for this! Only a few grammatical errors that I saw (Like I think you needed an "s" somewhere). I like how you portray Applejack in this scenario, you write her well. I can't wait for more!
The pace does seem a teensy bit fast so far, but I'm definitely intrigued and waiting for more
Strap on your collective diapers! It's going to be a messy ride.
Incidentally, it always seems like stories (and I use the term loosely here) that require some sort of attempt at a disclaimer give off this conflicting "don't you DARE troll me/please stripmine me for lols' sort of vibe. What most trolls fail to realize however is there is no need to troll for loos here when they can all be had with a quick skimming through of the written cornucopia of laughs offered. That being said though, you do need to possess a rather morbid sense of humor for things like this. I'm also using this story as a reference when bronies try to claim that bronys and curries are not one and the same. Keep up the good work mate!
I often feel sad for stories of this "theme".... Usually, the like to dislike ratio is pretty matched and, looking through your other stories' you appear to be quite the writer. You kind of have to wonder how many of those dislikes read the story first, then judged it, and how many just see the word "diapers" and instant dislike and leave..... Usually, I get iffy about reading stories with such amount of "hate" but for these types I generally have to guess... But, I think I'll give it a read, and I don't have many doubts that it'll be good
Sweet, I loved your Post-Cupcake stories and I love AF stories. This doesn't deserve so many dislikes though. It's well written, goes into the psychology of the fetish, and it's not just clopclopclopclop. Can't wait for more!
I allways liked stories like this that go into kinks/fetishes and why someone (or somepony) have them. But also how it affects their life, from the hard part of coming out to the struggles they go through and the inner turmoil it can create. So with a theme at hand I certainly see a lot of potential and I can clearly say i'm looking forward to see where it goes.
This is what I would call infantilism done tastefully. Even though it's about a fetish topic, it's not presented in a fetishy manner so to say. Usually when I read stories that have to do with it, I never expect that much depth or thought, just the fetish and some seductive writing. But to actually have a nice story to go with it, is a good thing.
a good concept but too rushed.
I think that the part that Applejack got her answer straight away was a little too hasty. Also maybe some reluctance on the part of the shopkeeper would have looked nice.
I wish that shopkeeper existed in real life.