More spelling errors. Most can be found if you just watch for the red strikes when you edit it.
Words are not suppose to have capitals in the middle of them. Everypony, not EveryPony.
Anyway, I am 25, so don't feel too bad. You can become a better writer it just takes practice.
Spelling and grammar can be overlooked by a lot of people including myself if the story is interesting. Believe it or not I'm not a grammar nazi and I hate people who call my story crap for little things like where my commas are. "Or my fullstops being before or after a line of dialogue". "dialogue."
Oh don't you worry I have clopped to many stories. That's why I wanted to give back to the clopfic community, with a crappy Fluttershy rape fic. But with all the feedback and fans it is getting, It's becoming more then that. I'm starting to take it seriously.
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Ok. BTW im 14.
Dyslexic.
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Its ok :D
Im just having a hard time with these stupid cracks on my screen.
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Imma put the big mac dialouge in and put in (Proof Read by The Mystery Fluttershy Fan)
Okay I'm sorry, I don't really know what being dyslexic involves.
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Being stupid at a certain subject.
Mine = Spelling
More spelling errors. Most can be found if you just watch for the red strikes when you edit it.
Words are not suppose to have capitals in the middle of them. Everypony, not EveryPony.
Anyway, I am 25, so don't feel too bad. You can become a better writer it just takes practice.
Spelling and grammar can be overlooked by a lot of people including myself if the story is interesting. Believe it or not I'm not a grammar nazi and I hate people who call my story crap for little things like where my commas are. "Or my fullstops being before or after a line of dialogue". "dialogue."
Anyway, keep it up.
Fluttershy demands it.
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Oh don't you worry I have clopped to many stories. That's why I wanted to give back to the clopfic community, with a crappy Fluttershy rape fic. But with all the feedback and fans it is getting, It's becoming more then that. I'm starting to take it seriously.
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THX.
BTW ur story made me cum :(
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I should be horrified that you told me that....
but it means I did a good job writing, thank you.
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My cracks got worse :(