One little foal needs help very badly. Cadance thinks she can save her; but as the foal recounts her experiences, the Princess finds herself tempted to enter a perverse world she never knew existed.
Poor silly little Cadance. That's what you get for not deceiving fillies. Just a little lie and filly would not even notice how her feelings for Rarity are vanishing before it's too late. But no, Her Righteousness wants it the honest way. Placing honor before reason leads nowhere. Her contrast with Rarity, who was very effective at persuasion, is astonishing.
Is it strange of me not to feel pity for Luna at all?
I think I've run out of pity for almost all the characters involved. What Celestia did because her sister lost her mind was horrible, but Luna's punishment for those deeds was so horrible in return that I just can't find it in my heart to look at any of them without utter disgust.
3392992 Ironically stepping into the horseshoes of her aunts with it if she did. Funny how that works out. However, at this point, it's still only a recommendation I think.
You know, looking at the description of the story and chapter two, I wonder whether Cadance will try to get her husband to abuse her.
I was originally going to go with the same teaser format as A Silver Sky, but since I'd already named the story after a musical term I figured I'd try out a sound theme instead, with little sounds from scenes that will occur in the next chapter. The result is, if anything, even more gratuitous and vague than before. Oh, boy!
It might intrest you to know that two of my fav characters in the story are Dr. Triage and Gaze/2020
Dr. Triage had such an interesting back story and seemed less cruel then the other circle members. despite her carving an X in Silvers ass. I don't think she really deserved what 20/20 gave her but I understand. Too bad she had to die, I really liked her personality and design. For a foal molester anyway.
20/20 reminds me of my own Spy Drone 001 of Chrysalis's Army intelligence, AKA "Cypher" Silver and Diamond's body guard and personal pet changeling Spy.
it is freaky that two of my OCs remind me so much of yours.
I started Serving Silver Spoon almost a year ago but only read the TS series a few moths ago. I was shocked just how much Serving and Tarnished Silver are to each other. I even tweaked my Silver to make her slightly more masochistic at times.
Then There's Cypher. He came later in my blog but again I was knocked on my ass about how much alike he is to Gaze and 20/20 right down to the silent teleportation!
I am only sorry how poorly I had Cypher represent Gaze in my RPs. I forgot the glasses and got the cutiemark wrong. Oh well.
Rest In Peace noble Knight.. you were of great service to your country and your Princess. you will be missed. RIP Twenty Twenty; The hero Equestria Needed but not the one they deserved.
I have to say it would be a terrible crime indeed what Cadance proposes. Rarity chose the two ponies in the world left that love her. To take that love away from Silver Spoon would be cruel to both parties.
what happens like 6 or 7 years from now when it's time for Silver Spoon to visit Rarity for the first time?
all those years Rarity would wait for two young mares who still love her and only get one, whether or not Silver decides to exercise her visitation rights after being stripped of all love for Rarity.
could it BE anymore awkward?
FIGHT SILVER SPOON. Your love is not a cancer to be removed. You just need to learn a little self control. Once gain you blow me away, Ham.
3392673 YES YES the very same Servingspoon69! OMG I cant believe you are familiar with my work! I am SO squeeing right now and OMG another chapter to this side story I cant wait to read!
here I thought the story was over and you come out with this therapy angle. I laughed so hard when Cadance trotted in on Silver clopping LOL
let me know anytime you want to RP or chat on my tumblr.
you are my favorite MLP fan fic author. The second fav would be the author of "Past Sins".
Good job so far! It feels a little different to not have Sweetie, Twist, Diamond, or Pipsqueak in this story at all. But I am sure as this story goes on I will become more accustomed to fewer characters.
Don't take the easy way Ham. Silver deserves better.
Poor silly little Cadance. That's what you get for not deceiving fillies. Just a little lie and filly would not even notice how her feelings for Rarity are vanishing before it's too late. But no, Her Righteousness wants it the honest way. Placing honor before reason leads nowhere. Her contrast with Rarity, who was very effective at persuasion, is astonishing.
Is it strange of me not to feel pity for Luna at all?
I think I've run out of pity for almost all the characters involved. What Celestia did because her sister lost her mind was horrible, but Luna's punishment for those deeds was so horrible in return that I just can't find it in my heart to look at any of them without utter disgust.
Using mind alteration against the will of a foal? Treading dangerous waters, Cadenza.
THE HINTS, HAM.
WHAT DO THEY MEAN!?
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Ironically stepping into the horseshoes of her aunts with it if she did. Funny how that works out. However, at this point, it's still only a recommendation I think.
You know, looking at the description of the story and chapter two, I wonder whether Cadance will try to get her husband to abuse her.
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They mean I am a shameless goddamn tease.
I was originally going to go with the same teaser format as A Silver Sky, but since I'd already named the story after a musical term I figured I'd try out a sound theme instead, with little sounds from scenes that will occur in the next chapter. The result is, if anything, even more gratuitous and vague than before. Oh, boy!
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It's definitely a charming system.
Charming and even more incredibly frustrating than before.
It might intrest you to know that two of my fav characters in the story are Dr. Triage and Gaze/2020
Dr. Triage had such an interesting back story and seemed less cruel then the other circle members. despite her carving an X in Silvers ass. I don't think she really deserved what 20/20 gave her but I understand. Too bad she had to die, I really liked her personality and design. For a foal molester anyway.
20/20 reminds me of my own Spy Drone 001 of Chrysalis's Army intelligence, AKA "Cypher" Silver and Diamond's body guard and personal pet changeling Spy.
it is freaky that two of my OCs remind me so much of yours.
I started Serving Silver Spoon almost a year ago but only read the TS series a few moths ago. I was shocked just how much Serving and Tarnished Silver are to each other. I even tweaked my Silver to make her slightly more masochistic at times.
Then There's Cypher. He came later in my blog but again I was knocked on my ass about how much alike he is to Gaze and 20/20 right down to the silent teleportation!
I am only sorry how poorly I had Cypher represent Gaze in my RPs. I forgot the glasses and got the cutiemark wrong. Oh well.
Rest In Peace noble Knight.. you were of great service to your country and your Princess. you will be missed.
RIP Twenty Twenty; The hero Equestria Needed but not the one they deserved.
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Oh my GOD.. it's just like Rarity SAID.. "Nopony is innocent!"
either by choice or the circumstances presented them, every character in this story has been TARNISHED in one way or another!
I have to say it would be a terrible crime indeed what Cadance proposes. Rarity chose the two ponies in the world left that love her. To take that love away from Silver Spoon would be cruel to both parties.
what happens like 6 or 7 years from now when it's time for Silver Spoon to visit Rarity for the first time?
all those years Rarity would wait for two young mares who still love her and only get one, whether or not Silver decides to exercise her visitation rights after being stripped of all love for Rarity.
could it BE anymore awkward?
FIGHT SILVER SPOON. Your love is not a cancer to be removed. You just need to learn a little self control.
Once gain you blow me away, Ham.
3392673
YES YES the very same Servingspoon69! OMG I cant believe you are familiar with my work! I am SO squeeing right now and OMG another chapter to this side story I cant wait to read!
here I thought the story was over and you come out with this therapy angle. I laughed so hard when Cadance trotted in on Silver clopping LOL
let me know anytime you want to RP or chat on my tumblr.
you are my favorite MLP fan fic author. The second fav would be the author of "Past Sins".
Good job so far! It feels a little different to not have Sweetie, Twist, Diamond, or Pipsqueak in this story at all. But I am sure as this story goes on I will become more accustomed to fewer characters.
Keep up the good work.
Am I the only one who really wants to see Silver get back with Diamond as a couple?
Diamond's line when she said "One day you will be mine again.. No.. I will be yours." well that just broke my heart!