One little foal needs help very badly. Cadance thinks she can save her; but as the foal recounts her experiences, the Princess finds herself tempted to enter a perverse world she never knew existed.
well this unfortunately brings back bitter sweet memories.
I was once in Cadence's place when I visited a BDSM club for the first and prob last time.
I know how she felt. I watched in shock as a woman was strung up and beaten with a bull whip by a skilled master. with each lash I don't even remember her uttering a single word.. well I don't remember but doesn't mean she didn't say anything. Suffice it to say it was farther then I ever wanted to go in the lifestyle.
It was a bitter sweet night not because of the place, that was kina fun, but the assholes I was with who I trusted to introduce me to that world.
now I am pretty much asexual in that I have little desire or energy to be with a partner. But I had a mistress once. And I miss the connection we had. So I aslo know how Silver Spoon feels. I guess it helps me in my RPs on tumblr as Serving Silver Spoon.
another powerful chapter. I hope it wont end with the next one so soon.
Awesome chapter Ham ^.^ I don't really know where this is heading yet, and I won't know at least for another week. Keep on doing awesome things with your fingers on that keyboard. I wonder if this story is going to be more focused on the BDSM side of things as opposed to foals. (And that goodbye better not be an end to the story. )
3483137. I hadn't realised clubs like this actually existed. Or at least I had never thought to look for them. What happened that made it a less than awesome night? Why didn't you go back if it was the people you arrived with that made it unpleasant?
3484357 the people I came with and the memory of them was what made the night bitter sweet.
I had fun otherwise.
but I wasn't a member. I was the guest of my current mistress at the time. It's not that she was a bad person really, we just had no real connection.
I didn't know really what I wanted and still don't. Now I have no partner to explore with and no desire to try again anytime soon.
For one thing I have barely enough energy to get around the house let alone engage in BDSM activities. Sex in general is out of the question.
Also I cant drive due to my condition and the club is in a city 2hrs away from me. Not that I have money to pay to get in as a guest with no escort who is a member.
It was years ago and I don't even remember where the club was or what it was called but they do exist. Not as much sex though as Cadence described happening. If any.. my memory is kina stale on that night.
Yep, next week is the conclusion. Which still makes this story twice as long as I originally planned it to be! This happens to me a lot. Longtime readers may remember when I said that A Silver Sky would probably be shorter than Twisted.
3483137 Quite a story, Serving. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Clubs like those can indeed by very intimidating. How would you describe them, Pip?
Good lad. Yeah, they're definitely not for everyone (even if you're into BDSM.) Personally I find the whole scene intriguing but I definitely would not go without someone I trust.
Is it wrong that I'm more interested in what's going on with Cadance and Shinning Armor than with Silver Spoon? I really want to see them work out their problems. Maybe Cadence can convince him to go back to the club with her, they could be subs together and get dommed by that nice mare with the two stallions. Yeah, that would be fun!
Or not. I don't know, I just want wanna see those crazy kids make it out of this alright. I have such a weakness for this kind of drama, it hurts so good.
3485684 Oh man it's over?! Reckon there'll be a shorter gap between this one and the next? Compared to last time I mean. ^.^ I doubt i'll go it alone. Looks far more intense than anything i've been involved in.
This probably won't be the last we see of the Tarnished universe. Every now and then I get drawn back into it! I doubt I'll ever write more than a shorter story here or there, though. Yes, I am counting this six-chapter fic as "short."
I can't say how long it'll be until I write more, though. This one was only written because I was between projects and that happened to coincide with the 3rd anniversary of FiM. Your guess is as good as mine!
Is it wrong that I'm more interested in what's going on with Cadance and Shinning Armor than with Silver Spoon?
Not really! Cadance is more of a focus this time, and we already know how Silver turns out, at least long-term. I intended for Cadance to be the main character of this story, though of course my focus is going to wander over to Silver from time to time. Just be glad this isn't A Silver Sky or I'd be tempted to give everyone with more than two sentences of dialog their own heartbreakingly dramatic subplot ("Hey gang, let's flashback to Charger's teenage years for the next three chapters!")
As for the fate of the royal marriage, you'll find out next week!
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Ham, you TEASE!
Oh man... who's saying goodbye?!
I'm on the edge of my seat!
Ahhh, is this a ruse? Is it really over so soon?
well this unfortunately brings back bitter sweet memories.
I was once in Cadence's place when I visited a BDSM club for the first and prob last time.
I know how she felt. I watched in shock as a woman was strung up and beaten with a bull whip by a skilled master. with each lash I don't even remember her uttering a single word.. well I don't remember but doesn't mean she didn't say anything. Suffice it to say it was farther then I ever wanted to go in the lifestyle.
It was a bitter sweet night not because of the place, that was kina fun, but the assholes I was with who I trusted to introduce me to that world.
now I am pretty much asexual in that I have little desire or energy to be with a partner. But I had a mistress once. And I miss the connection we had. So I aslo know how Silver Spoon feels. I guess it helps me in my RPs on tumblr as Serving Silver Spoon.
another powerful chapter. I hope it wont end with the next one so soon.
And then Cadence was a switch.
Awesome chapter Ham ^.^
I don't really know where this is heading yet, and I won't know at least for another week. Keep on doing awesome things with your fingers on that keyboard.
I wonder if this story is going to be more focused on the BDSM side of things as opposed to foals. (And that goodbye better not be an end to the story. )
3483137.
I hadn't realised clubs like this actually existed. Or at least I had never thought to look for them. What happened that made it a less than awesome night?
Why didn't you go back if it was the people you arrived with that made it unpleasant?
3484357
the people I came with and the memory of them was what made the night bitter sweet.
I had fun otherwise.
but I wasn't a member. I was the guest of my current mistress at the time. It's not that she was a bad person really, we just had no real connection.
I didn't know really what I wanted and still don't. Now I have no partner to explore with and no desire to try again anytime soon.
For one thing I have barely enough energy to get around the house let alone engage in BDSM activities. Sex in general is out of the question.
Also I cant drive due to my condition and the club is in a city 2hrs away from me. Not that I have money to pay to get in as a guest with no escort who is a member.
It was years ago and I don't even remember where the club was or what it was called but they do exist. Not as much sex though as Cadence described happening. If any.. my memory is kina stale on that night.
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I see. Thanks for sharing!
Well it seems there's one not too far from me, and it has Cadence in the name of it... So maybe I should take it as a sign.
3484614 NO WAY!!?
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Yep, next week is the conclusion. Which still makes this story twice as long as I originally planned it to be! This happens to me a lot. Longtime readers may remember when I said that A Silver Sky would probably be shorter than Twisted.
3483137
Quite a story, Serving. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Clubs like those can indeed by very intimidating. How would you describe them, Pip?
Good lad. Yeah, they're definitely not for everyone (even if you're into BDSM.) Personally I find the whole scene intriguing but I definitely would not go without someone I trust.
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Clearly, the Bondage Gods have a purpose for you.
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Well okay then.. and thanks Pipsy!
so will there be any more to the Tarnished time line?
Is it wrong that I'm more interested in what's going on with Cadance and Shinning Armor than with Silver Spoon? I really want to see them work out their problems. Maybe Cadence can convince him to go back to the club with her, they could be subs together and get dommed by that nice mare with the two stallions. Yeah, that would be fun!
Or not. I don't know, I just want wanna see those crazy kids make it out of this alright. I have such a weakness for this kind of drama, it hurts so good.
3485684
Oh man it's over?! Reckon there'll be a shorter gap between this one and the next? Compared to last time I mean.
^.^ I doubt i'll go it alone. Looks far more intense than anything i've been involved in.
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This probably won't be the last we see of the Tarnished universe. Every now and then I get drawn back into it! I doubt I'll ever write more than a shorter story here or there, though. Yes, I am counting this six-chapter fic as "short."
I can't say how long it'll be until I write more, though. This one was only written because I was between projects and that happened to coincide with the 3rd anniversary of FiM. Your guess is as good as mine!
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Not really! Cadance is more of a focus this time, and we already know how Silver turns out, at least long-term. I intended for Cadance to be the main character of this story, though of course my focus is going to wander over to Silver from time to time. Just be glad this isn't A Silver Sky or I'd be tempted to give everyone with more than two sentences of dialog their own heartbreakingly dramatic subplot ("Hey gang, let's flashback to Charger's teenage years for the next three chapters!")
As for the fate of the royal marriage, you'll find out next week!
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Okay Hammy
looking forward to the final Chapter of interrupted Cadance.
Well it's all Slaaneeshi worship.
And nobody uses "stop" as a safeword no matter the inflection.