One little foal needs help very badly. Cadance thinks she can save her; but as the foal recounts her experiences, the Princess finds herself tempted to enter a perverse world she never knew existed.
Anyways, this is truly, masterfully written. Exponentially better presented than earlier works, which is saying a lot.
I kept wondering all over the last chapter or two how you were going to explain Cadance's thing here, and sexually-boring Shining Armor is a route I never saw coming.
And the teasing at the end of each chapter is going to be the end of me.
Rampant speculation! The only explanation for a filly interacting with Rarity is that it happened previously, so listen for the sound of flashbacks.
BRAVO Ham! you have done it again! I love how Silver kina took charge of the session. I love how she plans to help Cadance understand her self at the same time Cadance is trying to understand and guide Silver Spoon.
an exciting new chapter in this saga has begun.
and I couldn't be more thrilled to read more!
I cant wait to here more of Silver and Ms Rarity
I love your Silver Spoon with all my heart.
I wonder if Diamond Tiara will take advantage of the services provided damaged foals? She to was broken at one point by Rarity and spent a week with her former attacker. that has to do something to a foal.
They really need more communication in their relationship.
It's true. Not that Cadance gets a pass, but Shining really should have said something like "By the way, I might be near-asexual," before they got married.
3442062 In my mind, Silver's future girlfriend is none other than Babs Seed. But I never actually established that in the story, so it can be Scoots if you want it to be!
3455016 Oh YEEEEAH Babsy does better fit the description! I could TOTTALLY see her as Silver Spoon's mistress. She practically OWNED both SS and DT for two days. She was the ring leader of her very own gang.
I am still getting used to the story with less characters and a plot at a smaller scale.
That's not to say that I am not enjoying this story. I think this is really well written!
It's just hard to follow-up A Silver Sky, because it was so EPIC!
I can't believe I miss the multiple separate story arcs of A Silver Sky! I miss Twist, and Peregrine, and Happy Tune, and Indigo Dream, even Rarity! How did a group of molested foals and the ponies that molest them become so timeless in only one year?
HamGravy is back! This story feels a lot different from your others... but it has still been amazing thus far. Some epic lines in here too: "And I try not to let him know how suffocating his kindness can feel" How do you come up with these? Do you like rewrite the same sentence until you look at it and think 'woah that's cool' or do they just come to you?
3457801 Sweet babies, there's a Tarnished Silver ask tumblr? That's...really awesome! I'm quite proud that someone would want to do a fan project like this based on my story. Thank you! (Do you think you could toss up a link to my user profile in the About box, though, so people can find the stories more easily?)
I miss Twist, and Peregrine, and Happy Tune, and Indigo Dream, even Rarity!
Yeah, they're all pretty cool in their own ways, but I wanted this story to be more focused and shorter, so you won't be seeing most of those ponies.
I miss Twist, and Peregrine, and Happy Tune, and Indigo Dream, even Rarity!
How did a group of molested foals and the ponies that molest them become so timeless in only one year?
I don't know but this question is kind of scary to contemplate. "Molested foals and the ponies that molest them" is not a genre I ever thought I would be so prolific in.
How do you come up with these? Do you like rewrite the same sentence until you look at it and think 'woah that's cool' or do they just come to you?
I guess it depends on the line? Sometimes it comes out right the first time, which usually means that I'm in a good groove and connecting well with the character I'm writing. Other times, I have to write it out a thousand times, then annihilate all that and write it completely differently. But then the hard work pays off and it comes out fairly adequate! Maybe!
Thanks for your kind words. Good to have you back and commenting!
Dude, it's good to hear from you again! I've really enjoyed a lot of your work lately. Fall of Equestria and Utopia Planiticia in particular. So much detail in those big images, and all of it filthy.
Also, the comparison to Crookedtrees is high praise indeed. I'm a bit fan of CT's work. Thank you!
Now, where can I literally publicly fellate you?
Meet me at Leicester Square at noon tomorrow. The queen herself shall drop the checkered flag.
(old Simpsons references: is there anything they can't do?)
For a while, I thought it was me. I thought I was doing something wrong. I tried every approach I could think of, but it seemed that my husband simply had a minimal interest in sex. The thought of another mare occurred to me, but that typically occurred when a stallion's sexual passion for his wife had fizzled, not when it had never been there in the first place.
Maybe the other mare was there before they got married. Perhaps a mare he grew up with his whole life before he ever met Cadence. A mare who currently lives in Ponyville on a mission to study the magic of friendship?
it's amazing how Cadence's relationship manages to be so riveting.
And how oddly distasteful you managed to make Shining
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ARRRGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Anyways, this is truly, masterfully written. Exponentially better presented than earlier works, which is saying a lot.
I kept wondering all over the last chapter or two how you were going to explain Cadance's thing here, and sexually-boring Shining Armor is a route I never saw coming.
And the teasing at the end of each chapter is going to be the end of me.
Rampant speculation! The only explanation for a filly interacting with Rarity is that it happened previously, so listen for the sound of flashbacks.
Also, a typo, I believe:
"Can put what happened yesterday in the past? I know you just want to help me..."
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Benny that pic sums up my current feelings perfectly. Gravy, I'm addicted to your stuff bro.
I feel so bad for, and yet disappointed in Cadence. The same goes for Shinning Armor. They really need more communication in their relationship.
BRAVO Ham! you have done it again! I love how Silver kina took charge of the session. I love how she plans to help Cadance understand her self at the same time Cadance is trying to understand and guide Silver Spoon.
an exciting new chapter in this saga has begun.
and I couldn't be more thrilled to read more!
I cant wait to here more of Silver and Ms Rarity
I love your Silver Spoon with all my heart.
I wonder if Diamond Tiara will take advantage of the services provided damaged foals? She to was broken at one point by Rarity and spent a week with her former attacker. that has to do something to a foal.
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"Chapter 5: The sound of harp music and the screen getting blurry."
Also, I fixed the typo, thanks for catching it!
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It's true. Not that Cadance gets a pass, but Shining really should have said something like "By the way, I might be near-asexual," before they got married.
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In my mind, Silver's future girlfriend is none other than Babs Seed. But I never actually established that in the story, so it can be Scoots if you want it to be!
Thanks for all the great comments, everyone.
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Oh YEEEEAH Babsy does better fit the description! I could TOTTALLY see her as Silver Spoon's mistress. She practically OWNED both SS and DT for two days. She was the ring leader of her very own gang.
Unfortuantely I already established Scoots in my Tarnished Silver side blog
http://www.tumblr.com/blog/twisted-little-silver-spoon
but yeah Babs makes more sense.
whoops ;^_^
Perhaps you could establish Babs Seed as the new mistress. maybe have her visit her old friend at the home for damaged foals and what not.
I wonder how Silver would receive her?
I am still getting used to the story with less characters and a plot at a smaller scale.
That's not to say that I am not enjoying this story. I think this is really well written!
It's just hard to follow-up A Silver Sky, because it was so EPIC!
I can't believe I miss the multiple separate story arcs of A Silver Sky!
I miss Twist, and Peregrine, and Happy Tune, and Indigo Dream, even Rarity!
How did a group of molested foals and the ponies that molest them become so timeless in only one year?
HamGravy is back!
This story feels a lot different from your others... but it has still been amazing thus far.
Some epic lines in here too:
"And I try not to let him know how suffocating his kindness can feel"
How do you come up with these? Do you like rewrite the same sentence until you look at it and think 'woah that's cool' or do they just come to you?
I'm just really pumped that you're back!
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Sweet babies, there's a Tarnished Silver ask tumblr? That's...really awesome! I'm quite proud that someone would want to do a fan project like this based on my story. Thank you! (Do you think you could toss up a link to my user profile in the About box, though, so people can find the stories more easily?)
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Thanks for catching that! It's fixed now.
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Yeah, they're all pretty cool in their own ways, but I wanted this story to be more focused and shorter, so you won't be seeing most of those ponies.
I miss Twist, and Peregrine, and Happy Tune, and Indigo Dream, even Rarity!
I don't know but this question is kind of scary to contemplate. "Molested foals and the ponies that molest them" is not a genre I ever thought I would be so prolific in.
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I guess it depends on the line? Sometimes it comes out right the first time, which usually means that I'm in a good groove and connecting well with the character I'm writing. Other times, I have to write it out a thousand times, then annihilate all that and write it completely differently. But then the hard work pays off and it comes out fairly adequate! Maybe!
Thanks for your kind words. Good to have you back and commenting!
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Dude, it's good to hear from you again! I've really enjoyed a lot of your work lately. Fall of Equestria and Utopia Planiticia in particular. So much detail in those big images, and all of it filthy.
Also, the comparison to Crookedtrees is high praise indeed. I'm a bit fan of CT's work. Thank you!
Meet me at Leicester Square at noon tomorrow. The queen herself shall drop the checkered flag.
(old Simpsons references: is there anything they can't do?)
Maybe the other mare was there before they got married. Perhaps a mare he grew up with his whole life before he ever met Cadence. A mare who currently lives in Ponyville on a mission to study the magic of friendship?