The elements of harmony stopped a mad scientist's plan, but in the aftermath of the battle the life of one of them will change significantly. Not only her own but one of her friend's lives as well.
Thank you. Yeah, I like it more if the characters tells the story on their own or push the story forward with their thoughts and POVs. I guess that's due the well-made characters of MLP like our beloved Mane6 as I like to see how they would have view this or that event. I hope chapter 2 is to your likings.
nicely done waiting will be the hardest part now and this star swirl fellow I do hope the makers of mlp read some of these fan made story's because the lot of you have really painted a picture of this pony it seems to me hes out of his gourd not so much in your story but in some of the others and im rambling arnt I? well any way cant wait for more
Thanks, you won't have to wait too long as I hope to upload ch.3 on sunday. And you're not rambling, I would also like to see more of Starswirl the bearded in MLP and hope for some stuff about him in S4.
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Yay, I can make use of your editor skills 7/24 from tomorrow on!
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Thank you. Yeah, I like it more if the characters tells the story on their own or push the story forward with their thoughts and POVs. I guess that's due the well-made characters of MLP like our beloved Mane6 as I like to see how they would have view this or that event. I hope chapter 2 is to your likings.
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Thank you and don't worry there's hope on the horizon. Or more sadness depending on how you feel about chapters 2 ending.
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Gracias.
I mean, that was a compliment, right? It had a smiling Pinkie Pie after all.
Waiting to be edited? Good sir, nag your editor till he does it! do not say it's done and make us wait!
nicely done waiting will be the hardest part now and this star swirl fellow I do hope the makers of mlp read some of these fan made story's because the lot of you have really painted a picture of this pony it seems to me hes out of his gourd not so much in your story but in some of the others and im rambling arnt I? well any way cant wait for more
Atleast Rainbow isn't grounded forever, or i she?
So what the hell does this spell need to work? A sacrifice? Some kind of giving up ones magic to infuse it in the patient? A partial soul transfer?
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Relax, it's nearly 8.5k words to proofread, they should take their time to make sure to not overlook too many mistakes of mine.
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Thanks, you won't have to wait too long as I hope to upload ch.3 on sunday. And you're not rambling, I would also like to see more of Starswirl the bearded in MLP and hope for some stuff about him in S4.
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Chapter 3 will handle that "grounded forever" matter.
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.....Are you a spy?
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.....maybe?
Not really. But I can read between the lines and see hints. Having a lively imagination probably helps too...
Me needs more. Give it to me!!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
3339944 Well have no fear as I have read the chapter and it is awesome!
Your cover art....is RD giving Twi a hornjob?
3343214 FORESHADOWING!