The Lich of the Scourge

by cellum95

Chapter 4: The Letter

Dear Twilight,

My humble student, sorry for being passive, but Applejack's sister, Apple Bloom, has been severely injured by an unknown pony. Her injury, including severe scars and bruises, has been studied this afternoon and might be studied for a while, and the culprit, who was in a cloak, must still be found. I'm sorry Twilight, it was just that I was busy from my loyal matters. I'm truly sorry, and please forgive me. Now, I'm also hearing rumors that a strange being has appeared suddenly in the Crystal Empire. They say that it can do magic. I want to see this being, and once again, I'm sorry for the tragedy. Applejack's sister is in the Ponyville Hospital, and the doctors said that she will be fine. However, they say it will take days for her injuries to recover. For that, please bear in mind that you must inform your friends. Thank you and please understand this.

By your faithful teacher,

Princess Celestia

Author's Note:

Chapter 4: The Letter is here! Sorry if the letter is short, that's why this chapter is the shortest. But don't worry, this unforgiving chapter will be overshadowed by the other chapters, including it's predecessors.

Comments

[Bazing]

How did Applejack get from the Crystal Kingdom to Ponyville, then injured and examined in less than a day? And how can Celestia protect Applejack, if she is in Ponyville, whilst she is busy?

"I'm also very sorry that I could not save her from danger. I'm truly sorry, and please forgive me."

Is not pointless but could be worded better
This story has potential, but it doesn't really make sense. Kel'Thuzad wants to kill and raise the dead, not communicate with ponies... There are also a few grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the story, it would probably be wise to re-read and edit it.

[cellum95]

3322993 I would.