An innocuous package left on Twilight Sparkle's doorstep marks the beggining of a journey of self discovery, which will challenge her perceptions of Equestrian society, her relationships with the ponies closest to her, and even her own sexuality
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Personally I am a PinkieDash fan so this part pleases me though that last part makes me nervous. I hope things don't go wrong for them...
Twinkie is second best for me.
By the way at first you had me really concerned in this chapter. Not for the cupcakes references or anything like that but I was worried about what Pinkies intentions were for her play date.
I was worried that she was in some way going to take advantage of Dash (not maliciously but more of a I don't know what I am doing and so I make a mistake sort of way). At the end I felt a lot better because it is clear that Pinkie is very unsure on what to do and is looking for help and is just failing at it completely. The best thing she did was just coming clean with Dash at the end which was probably the only way to salvage this thing as it was.
Hopefully Pinkie and Dashie can come to a real understanding of where their relationship can take them. Hopefully we will get to see it (and I of course hope it flourishes though I wouldn't mind it taking its time).
Damn it Play Date. Don't you know that just even thinking that statement it guarantees things are gonna go all wonky in the most spectacular fashion possible! ......Actually that might be fun to see. I retract my earlier statement, good job Play Date.
I recently stumbled across this story, and I have to say - it's really interesting. Secret sex clubs and political intrigue aren't something I'd normally expect to go together, but somehow they totally do.
Also, PinkieDash is adorable (I found this through the PinkieDash group, actually) and I quite like the way you've written it so far. Rarilight is also fun, even if I'm more neutral towards it.
As for other ships - I'm cool with most of them, though Dash ships are my favourite, particularly Appledash.
I look forward to future updates - those scummy Canterlot OC's really need to be taken down a peg, so it'll be interesting to see how you have Twilight and Rarity handle them.
Pinkie x Rainbow Dash honestly