An innocuous package left on Twilight Sparkle's doorstep marks the beggining of a journey of self discovery, which will challenge her perceptions of Equestrian society, her relationships with the ponies closest to her, and even her own sexuality
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I actually came here for the Pinkie and Dash dynamic. SO I guess you can put me down for wanting story first. Any sort of sex scenes are just extra to me
To me clop is something you use to spice up a story not necessarily the main course even if the subject matter is part of the main storyline. Take Romance Reports for example. It has a lot of sex scenes but many chapters don't at all even if the plot has sex as a common theme.
I also hope Pinkie and Dash can find a way to make themselves happy.
I'm gonna be blunt for a change. I'm only here for the story in itself, but I hate the TwiRarity. I don't mind the clop, but I am really not keen on how the relationship between the two is pulled off here. I swear, my eyes hurt when I read the sadomachochism in this chapter and my God, Twi, please stop calling Rares Queen or Mistress! Argh!
There, I said it. I hate the main pairing of this story, but I am fond of the story plotline because it tells on how nobles and politicians use a sexclub in order to scheme and make plottings to advance their own causes and how Twilight is introduced to it all in order to become a better princess. That is why I read this story. Not for the sex or the pairings, but for the intrigue.
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It's a delight to hear from you again, Crimson. I wouldn't worry too much about Pinkie and Rainbow, they'll work things out. More or less. Play Date might panic a little when she finds out that things are going so off course, so obviously she'll take it upon herself to help. Misguided antagonists are so much fun, aren't they?
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You might be my favorite reader just now, if only because I'm pleased to discover that some people are reasonably content to enjoy a story with sex, regardless of the sex. In spite of it, even! Sadly, the dom/sub thing is kinda... not going anywhere. It's likely to get worse from your point of view.
On the plus side, once we hit Canterlot you can expect a significant increase in political gesturing, backstabbing (metaphorically), heartbreaking (also metaphorical), and cheating (literal AND metaphorical). Also, some insight into just how far The Club's influence stretches. Thanks a lot for bearing with the insipid "treat me like royalty" thing.
Originally came for the clop. Stayed for the story. But I like both aspects still. Both full clop and full plot chapters are fine with me, as long as it doesn't go too many in a row of one without the other.
The Pinkie Dash thing is just background noise for me, thus far, though.
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Thanks for the opinion. I'm trying to strike a balance, and if it seems off at some point, just say so. As for the side story, it's kind of meant to be more of an exploration of how The Club affects relationships between friends and significant others, as opposed to the social implications explored in the main storyline. I can understand where that might be boring by comparison, but writing the more light-hearted fun (and squabbles) that Pinkie and Dash have is keeping me sane.
I came here for the story. Seemed very interesting, and of course the clop is an excellent bonus.
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Thank you both very much for the praise. It's very gratifying to know that some of my readers are enjoying my writing just as I'd hoped they would.
I must agree with Lelouch Vi Britania
and neobrony7. You really have hit a delicate and fantastic balance of clop and plot, the story is fantastic and when it happens, the clop is part of the story, and well done. I am eager for more.