Absolutely loved it, but i figured i might let you know it's still marked 'everyone' as of right now.

Yea, little warning on the mature woulda been nice. Luckily I'm not somewhere crowded with people starring over my shoulder.

Might want to change that everybody sign

Nonetheless another enjoyable TwiLuna part. Can never have enough good TwiLuna.

3328520 well he gave A warning he just didn't follow up on it.He said this chapter hewould change it to mature.... he failed to do so.

you got this marked as Everyone

I liked! Great confession at the end... And a cliffhanger, daaaaamn!!!

twiluna is by a lage margin best and this was damned adorable.

3328900 3328537 3328500 3328520OH MY GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH! I published this during study hall at the very last moment and forgot to change the rating! I hope I haven't scarred anyone! xD Anyways, thank you all for reminding me and also thank you for the compliments! Also, I am planning on a sort of Chapter 2.5 thing since I ended on a cliffhanger like that

Thanks again!

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your welcome

Quick Question for you all: I have this old version of the story that my friend and I TOTALLY botched up like it just turns to pure insanity and he wanted me to post that "alternate" chapter as well. Should I add it to here as a bonus or just make it into a blog post?

3353917 u should add as a new story. ^_^

3536265 hmmm i might do that except it isn't that long and it is just complete and utter nonsense

3536959 So! I've read several one shots like that...thay are usally the most entertaining to read.

3537381 hmmm I shall consider it timelinecoverbanner.com/cliparts/wp-content/digital-scrapbooking/determined-challenge-considered.png

I'm kinda suprised actually. Luna seemed more eager to finally GIVE it to somepony again rather than recieving it, I guess everyone would understand her for giving in to that urge after 1000 years of isolation. But nope. She just wants to make others happy.... This is why I love Luna^^

I think you could go farther with this if you wanted

3764458 I'm currently looking for inspiration for a new short story, I'm looking to stop with the whole series business for now but the chance of a two-chapter sequel is on the table right now.

3797360 yay

looks like cover traces to http://fav.me/d37x352 . May want to ask the artist if that's his art, just to be sure.

Well that escalated quickly. It was hilarious though. And TwiLuna is always a winner