Dying is such a troubling thing. Cadence chooses one plan that not only changes the foundation of her love for her husband, she wants to ensure he lives on even without her, until a cure if found for her disease. She just needs to stay strong.
Cadence is in danger. She may have been saved on the day of her wedding but something foul was left on her. An anticipated plan from a force she hated most.
Completely opposite: I thought it would be about Chrysalis getting into Cadence's mind, or Cadence slowly turning into a Changeling and then Chrysalis trying to get to her through the hive-mind. As it is, however, it is about Cadence slowly possessing Chrysalis.
4182301 You just gotta love twists and... Damn it spoiled in the comments. Anyway, reading the whole summary was better suited to tell what I was going for.
4183024 The next paragraph expressed that Cadance would turn the situation to her advantage, but I was imagining that she would use "godly mental fortitude" to turn the tables on Chrysalis or something.
Ha ha ha! We wish I had a picture of Cadence looking all shocked into the mirror for the last scene. Maybe even for the cover page, since that would throw people off too.
I would panic at her place. Cheated and traped.
I hope next chapter will be faster :D
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Well I'll obviously work on that, unfortunately, Life happens and my College finals are closing in, so sorry.
Wow: this story went the complete opposite way I thought it would.
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How opposite are we talking about? Because the summary should tell you who is who.
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Completely opposite: I thought it would be about Chrysalis getting into Cadence's mind, or Cadence slowly turning into a Changeling and then Chrysalis trying to get to her through the hive-mind. As it is, however, it is about Cadence slowly possessing Chrysalis.
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You just gotta love twists and... Damn it spoiled in the comments.
Anyway, reading the whole summary was better suited to tell what I was going for.
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The next paragraph expressed that Cadance would turn the situation to her advantage, but I was imagining that she would use "godly mental fortitude" to turn the tables on Chrysalis or something.
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Yeah, I guess it can be like that. But to create a convincing summary is to make it vague so the reader can be... Curious enough to read.
Ha ha ha! We wish I had a picture of Cadence looking all shocked into the mirror for the last scene. Maybe even for the cover page, since that would throw people off too.