Dying is such a troubling thing. Cadence chooses one plan that not only changes the foundation of her love for her husband, she wants to ensure he lives on even without her, until a cure if found for her disease. She just needs to stay strong.
You could use some help from someone on your grammar. You have a lot of tense-shifting between past and present, as well as some redundancy in your phrases. The story concept seems all right... you just need to polish your craft.
You could use some help from someone on your grammar. You have a lot of tense-shifting between past and present, as well as some redundancy in your phrases. The story concept seems all right... you just need to polish your craft.
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I am well aware with that problem of mine. But no user seems THAT interested to help me on that part.