The heartwarming story about a young couple's first time together. Well, the mare is actually a disguised changeling princess preparing to gain enough love to enact her plans to take over large parts of Equestria. That might be important.
Dude, you jumped. Tell us the story of sterling before you tell us he turned into a changeling at some point and is now fucking the broodmares.
Also, on another note, I am hoping for some more sterling carapace romance. I mean, carapace is an intelligent and non-animalistic queen who has some personality, so I just can't see her ONLY ambition being the growth of the hive. That, and I thought I picked up some genuine deep caring for her coltfriend early on.
At this point, I more or less come back to this and read a chapter because... well... it only takes a minute and appears to be going nowhere so it requires no real effort to comprehend. What we have to look forward to is Capapace systematically establishing a hive in an exceptionally uncomplicated manner with no particular drama or obstacles.
I figured you'd get around to telling us what happened to the once pony turned changeling cloud pounder. Yes, I feel bad for that pun. No... not really.
A very interesting chapter, it does make me wonder which one Thunderlane picked, though given how she reacts to Cloud's I am assuming its similar, though perhaps our queen to be here changed his mind as it seems she's doing to Clouds. That, or she's just gotten herself another broodmother. Either way I suppose it's win.
Is it bad I'd rather hoped Cloud would have picked to become a changeling and would have gone off to find her sister with Thunderlane to recruit her too?
4002618 You are commenting on a lot of stories I've been reading, and spewing anti-changeling rhetoric all over their comment sections. Why? Changelings are ponies too...bug ponies...BUT STILL PONIES!
4050482 *points to the changeling main character in this story, and her evil plans and evil actions... CLEARLY UNAMBIGUOUSLY EVIL ACTIONS...* Yeah... kinda ignoring the evidence against her, ain't ya?
So my plans for changeling genocide are justified!
Hmm, how unfortunate, based on what happened in the story. Based what has been stated in this chapter, it would seem that Princess Carapace had traded in Sterling for a mindless drone, as it leaves an impression that the stallion is in a mind-controlled stance with little-to-no personality when he's introduced in this chapter. Makes it quite dark, which easily justified with the Dark Tag in this story. Keep up the good work, mate.
Yayyyyy more updates are coming
Wait, Sterling was the stallion from the first few chapters right? Did he get transformed or what?
Dude, you jumped. Tell us the story of sterling before you tell us he turned into a changeling at some point and is now fucking the broodmares.
Also, on another note, I am hoping for some more sterling carapace romance. I mean, carapace is an intelligent and non-animalistic queen who has some personality, so I just can't see her ONLY ambition being the growth of the hive. That, and I thought I picked up some genuine deep caring for her coltfriend early on.
Felt kind of rushed in this chapter. Hopefully future chapters will describe what happened to Sterling and Thunderlane.
At this point, I more or less come back to this and read a chapter because... well... it only takes a minute and appears to be going nowhere so it requires no real effort to comprehend. What we have to look forward to is Capapace systematically establishing a hive in an exceptionally uncomplicated manner with no particular drama or obstacles.
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3994862 Sterling's status will be explained in the next chapter.
This might be horrible changeling sex, but it isn't plotless.
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I figured you'd get around to telling us what happened to the once pony turned changeling cloud pounder. Yes, I feel bad for that pun. No... not really.
A very interesting chapter, it does make me wonder which one Thunderlane picked, though given how she reacts to Cloud's I am assuming its similar, though perhaps our queen to be here changed his mind as it seems she's doing to Clouds. That, or she's just gotten herself another broodmother. Either way I suppose it's win.
Is it bad I'd rather hoped Cloud would have picked to become a changeling and would have gone off to find her sister with Thunderlane to recruit her too?
Well, at least you had the decency to make the rape chapter short.
See?
Changelings are evil parasitic rapists!
(Perfect propaganda for my changeling extermination plans!)
4002618 You are commenting on a lot of stories I've been reading, and spewing anti-changeling rhetoric all over their comment sections. Why? Changelings are ponies too...bug ponies...BUT STILL PONIES!
4050482 *points to the changeling main character in this story, and her evil plans and evil actions... CLEARLY UNAMBIGUOUSLY EVIL ACTIONS...* Yeah... kinda ignoring the evidence against her, ain't ya?
So my plans for changeling genocide are justified!
I'm getting a Competent Villains vibe with this chapter
Hmm, how unfortunate, based on what happened in the story. Based what has been stated in this chapter, it would seem that Princess Carapace had traded in Sterling for a mindless drone, as it leaves an impression that the stallion is in a mind-controlled stance with little-to-no personality when he's introduced in this chapter. Makes it quite dark, which easily justified with the Dark Tag in this story. Keep up the good work, mate.