The heartwarming story about a young couple's first time together. Well, the mare is actually a disguised changeling princess preparing to gain enough love to enact her plans to take over large parts of Equestria. That might be important.
if they worked together they would only be pulveried by the regal sisters. chrysalis only beat celestia because of a mixture of surprise and unknown power. if celestia was already aware of her power increase then she would have have dragged on a battle till chrysalis used up that energy, and then struck her down. both of the sisters were enough to frighten discord even, as he felt forced to take an indirect method to defeat them considering that whole pludner vine scenario.
best carapace can hope for is that she does not cause anyone any permanent damage. the regal sisters would want to be merciful, but if she hurt someone they would be forced to show none.
Does she truely care about her original male? the guy she came to this hotel with in the first place, i mean. I find it hard to tell if she actually has any romantic notions about him, and i do hope so.
Also, keep updating please....i find this story interesting and would love to see it move forward.
4746717 She did, in a fashion, but she pretty much screwed up in yanking his free will right out under him and putting him under her thrall.
4746306 There are several things wrong with this, because it is mostly constructed out of assumptions and beliefs that are false, but I'll approach it, because deleting this would be in bad taste.
4748818 ........... ummm, they CAN. chrysalis was certainly no match for celestia and one solely from sueprior magical muscle, which was unfortunately a temporary thing for her. lacking an education system, and likely age, the changelings probably have inferior magic overall. heck the comic also proves that by chrysalis admitting her lack of knwoledge. there are three alicorns at least, thoguh i am unsure if tiwlight is a factor here. an alicorn far surpasses a queen's capacity for magic and has better mystical education and, amongst that, the attributes of all three pony tribes to go with it.
celestia defended a world filled with things like chrysalis for a thousand years alone. if that is not proof enough of her power then i do not know what is. also using that picture does not really count because that was during her younger days with the combination of the weight of the crown, longing for attachment, and loss of her sister bhy her own hoof and neglect pressing down on her.
4748818 too be fair they would need far more effort than a wave of a hoof but the regal sisters individually are in another league. the reason why beings like them exist is because beings like them are capable of harming entire armies. would suspect that most nations in equestria actually do have some elite force in some capacity t ofight monsters, ursurpers, and cranky ursa minors.
4748818 Oh well, here is hoping the romance can be re-established and they can resolve the issue. But I am probably unique in that i probably wouldn't mind my girl using other ponies to start a hive of parasitic organisms, especially if it was because she would have lost her mind otherwise.
4751998 which makes the story utterly contrived if that is the case, not to mention idiotic. to make celestia weak is a lazy method of dealing with that situation. completely and utterly lazy. mainly because in the series, despite her losing to entities that the narrative has tiwlight defeating in some manner, she is very powerful. hell there i no way to make her weak yet have equestria survivie for a thousand years. there are far too many threats that exist in the wrold for there to be any scenraio other than celestia being powerful and fighting them off whenver the reared their heads.
4751998 for all the crazy supernatural thingies in equestria there is a sense of common reaction. when she lost luna, celestia built up her army. if there world is full of supernatural threats, as it obviously is, celestia being weak would mean equestria woudl fall long, long, long ago. it is impossible to have a story where she is weak without having the plot hole of how she defended equestria for a millenium.
4752069 1. Please stop double posting, it's pointless and just annoying. 2. Stop forcing your headcanon into other people's stories. If the author says she's weak, then she's weak, and it doesn't matter what threats the world is filled with. If that makes you hate the story then simply leave. Staying around and constantly whining will do nothing but irritate people.
4752033 Celestia is not weak here. She's easily the most powerful pony in the show. However, she is not a god, and she is fallible. Discord is far more powerful than she and her sister combined, but he was still taken down after they found the right magic rocks. Chrissi was operating on Twilight Sparkle-levels until she got that boost from the love of Shining Armor, who, for the record, was in love with the Alicorn who had a magical portfolio that basically centered on the Changeling's food supply. But, Twilight Sparkle is still up there in the top five list of most powerful ponies in the nation, and Chrissi isn't the most powerful individual changeling queen in this story, although she is certainty up there in the top three or so.
However, Celestia doesn't know everything or see everything, which is the reason why there are still evils that crawl out of some pit every so often to threaten the country.
You seem to assume this is all going to end in a big shooty fight with a selfish, overpowered changeling OC coming out on top. If you think that, then you should probably write another funny blogpost and stop posting on this story's comment page my goodness.
' fearless solders ' I think you mean 'soldier', right? And you forget to put capital letter on 'High Queen' and 'Royal Nymphs', if they are a title then you need to add it.
I suggest you to re-read each paragraphe twice and ask you 'did write every word right?', I know it sound boring to do, but it would help to eliminate easy mistake to fix and have a better chapter overall :)
if they worked together they would only be pulveried by the regal sisters. chrysalis only beat celestia because of a mixture of surprise and unknown power. if celestia was already aware of her power increase then she would have have dragged on a battle till chrysalis used up that energy, and then struck her down. both of the sisters were enough to frighten discord even, as he felt forced to take an indirect method to defeat them considering that whole pludner vine scenario.
best carapace can hope for is that she does not cause anyone any permanent damage. the regal sisters would want to be merciful, but if she hurt someone they would be forced to show none.
Does she truely care about her original male? the guy she came to this hotel with in the first place, i mean. I find it hard to tell if she actually has any romantic notions about him, and i do hope so.
Also, keep updating please....i find this story interesting and would love to see it move forward.
*Alondro's prototype changelings detector indicates that cherngelerngs are nearby!* I must kill them all... kill them all... kill them all...
4746717 She did, in a fashion, but she pretty much screwed up in yanking his free will right out under him and putting him under her thrall.
4746306 There are several things wrong with this, because it is mostly constructed out of assumptions and beliefs that are false, but I'll approach it, because deleting this would be in bad taste.
This is the pony that you are assuming that can instantly negate the whole bloody point of the story with some sort of deific wave of a hoof.
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4748818 ........... ummm, they CAN. chrysalis was certainly no match for celestia and one solely from sueprior magical muscle, which was unfortunately a temporary thing for her. lacking an education system, and likely age, the changelings probably have inferior magic overall. heck the comic also proves that by chrysalis admitting her lack of knwoledge.
there are three alicorns at least, thoguh i am unsure if tiwlight is a factor here. an alicorn far surpasses a queen's capacity for magic and has better mystical education and, amongst that, the attributes of all three pony tribes to go with it.
celestia defended a world filled with things like chrysalis for a thousand years alone. if that is not proof enough of her power then i do not know what is.
also using that picture does not really count because that was during her younger days with the combination of the weight of the crown, longing for attachment, and loss of her sister bhy her own hoof and neglect pressing down on her.
4748818 too be fair they would need far more effort than a wave of a hoof but the regal sisters individually are in another league. the reason why beings like them exist is because beings like them are capable of harming entire armies. would suspect that most nations in equestria actually do have some elite force in some capacity t ofight monsters, ursurpers, and cranky ursa minors.
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You are just everywhere, aren't you?
4748818 Oh well, here is hoping the romance can be re-established and they can resolve the issue. But I am probably unique in that i probably wouldn't mind my girl using other ponies to start a hive of parasitic organisms, especially if it was because she would have lost her mind otherwise.
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In your world Celestia is superpowered. In this world she's weak. End of discussion.
4751998 which makes the story utterly contrived if that is the case, not to mention idiotic. to make celestia weak is a lazy method of dealing with that situation. completely and utterly lazy. mainly because in the series, despite her losing to entities that the narrative has tiwlight defeating in some manner, she is very powerful.
hell there i no way to make her weak yet have equestria survivie for a thousand years. there are far too many threats that exist in the wrold for there to be any scenraio other than celestia being powerful and fighting them off whenver the reared their heads.
4751998 for all the crazy supernatural thingies in equestria there is a sense of common reaction. when she lost luna, celestia built up her army.
if there world is full of supernatural threats, as it obviously is, celestia being weak would mean equestria woudl fall long, long, long ago. it is impossible to have a story where she is weak without having the plot hole of how she defended equestria for a millenium.
4752069
1. Please stop double posting, it's pointless and just annoying.
2. Stop forcing your headcanon into other people's stories. If the author says she's weak, then she's weak, and it doesn't matter what threats the world is filled with. If that makes you hate the story then simply leave. Staying around and constantly whining will do nothing but irritate people.
4752033 Celestia is not weak here. She's easily the most powerful pony in the show. However, she is not a god, and she is fallible. Discord is far more powerful than she and her sister combined, but he was still taken down after they found the right magic rocks. Chrissi was operating on Twilight Sparkle-levels until she got that boost from the love of Shining Armor, who, for the record, was in love with the Alicorn who had a magical portfolio that basically centered on the Changeling's food supply. But, Twilight Sparkle is still up there in the top five list of most powerful ponies in the nation, and Chrissi isn't the most powerful individual changeling queen in this story, although she is certainty up there in the top three or so.
However, Celestia doesn't know everything or see everything, which is the reason why there are still evils that crawl out of some pit every so often to threaten the country.
You seem to assume this is all going to end in a big shooty fight with a selfish, overpowered changeling OC coming out on top. If you think that, then you should probably write another funny blogpost and stop posting on this story's comment page my goodness.
' fearless solders ' I think you mean 'soldier', right?
And you forget to put capital letter on 'High Queen' and 'Royal Nymphs', if they are a title then you need to add it.
I suggest you to re-read each paragraphe twice and ask you 'did write every word right?', I know it sound boring to do, but it would help to eliminate easy mistake to fix and have a better chapter overall :)
4750713 We are, yes. We are Alondro. Resistance is futile.
Yum yum fun fun. Goods chapter.