450067 I think it's just because of where I grew up/learned to speak. "she had had" sounds perfectly fine to me. It could be re-written as "she'd had", they're essentially the same thing because "she'd" = "she had". In fact, that's kind of how I pronounce it, "she'd had". Grammar kind of goes out of whack when writing about sexy futa ponies!
I dunno, it kinda felt awkward, like I couldn't come up with a GOOD reason for the two to get it on; a GOOD 'dinner and movie' before the sex. That's really the only part that constantly stuck out for me.
But eh, I'm not really writing this for the story (really just making shit up as I go) and I'm not really interested in any serious shipping either, so...yeah.
A week... that's 7 days, 168 hours, 10080 minutes, 604800 seconds... not enough time for Futashy to rut all of Ponyville I fear. But, what if a certain student told Princess Celestia about all the fun the little pegasus had had with her punishment, and what if this princess decided to prolong the punishment? All those possibilities...
Just discovered the story and it's awesome, Fluttershy is my favorite pony. I can't wait to see what happens next, there are so many possibilities. I was wondering did you plan on having her do anything with the Cutie Mark Crusaders?
"you haven't lived until you've had one of Spike's pancakes" oh really? My sister HATES grilled cheese sandwiches, won't eat them at all, but she says the one I make are awesome, she still doesn't eat grilled cheese made by anyone else. I challenge Spike to a cook-off!
Maybe her punishment will be to have it taken away so she may never have as much fun again. Or Celestia will get pissed at her for not inviting her again.
I've noticed that Fluttershy's friends have detected a strange taste to her. Maybe the dick is connected to Princess Celestia to make sure she doesn't 'miss out' on any fun?
A little cheesy/corny this chapter. Was seriously having a hard time coming up with a good idea for this pairing.
Also, going to be taking a short break or something from this, to write a couple little requests for friends. Shouldn't be too long.
How about a revenge chapter? Have Gilda return and Fluttershy 'punish' her for her actions.
440697 A Gilda chapter IS something that I really want to do. Currently trying to fit her into the RD chapter, somehow. Not really sure how though.
"I'll tell her when the time is right..."
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Chapter 5: Rainbow Dash
Now that would be just silly timing.
440760 i know how about a crossover chapter like say fluttershy and totalynotabrony or fluttershy and issac clark or something :D
Flutterpie
450067 I think it's just because of where I grew up/learned to speak. "she had had" sounds perfectly fine to me. It could be re-written as "she'd had", they're essentially the same thing because "she'd" = "she had". In fact, that's kind of how I pronounce it, "she'd had". Grammar kind of goes out of whack when writing about sexy futa ponies!
Ok great story so far.. But now I think we need a threeway with Soarin and Spitfire
... And so kinky bondage time with trixy or Gilda
Derpy. There must be derpy......... or docter Whooves
452623 It seemed a little lacking to me, too.
I dunno, it kinda felt awkward, like I couldn't come up with a GOOD reason for the two to get it on; a GOOD 'dinner and movie' before the sex. That's really the only part that constantly stuck out for me.
But eh, I'm not really writing this for the story (really just making shit up as I go) and I'm not really interested in any serious shipping either, so...yeah.
I think there should be a threesome that includes Nurse Redheart and Nurse Tenderheart.
A week... that's 7 days, 168 hours, 10080 minutes, 604800 seconds... not enough time for Futashy to rut all of Ponyville I fear. But, what if a certain student told Princess Celestia about all the fun the little pegasus had had with her punishment, and what if this princess decided to prolong the punishment? All those possibilities...
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these chapters never fail me
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486036 make it happen, brony.
please?
As long as you're thinking royal wedding. Perhaps she has "fun" with Cadence at the bachelorette party?
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Yeah, that was just a joke. Maybe I'll add it as a bonus chapter though.
501183 Pweeeeeeeese???
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I second the motion!
Just discovered the story and it's awesome, Fluttershy is my favorite pony. I can't wait to see what happens next, there are so many possibilities. I was wondering did you plan on having her do anything with the Cutie Mark Crusaders?
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Nope. Underaged characters are not my thing.
No worries, as long as the adorable Futashy keeps having fun it will be a great story :-) keep up the great work please
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Exactly.
668168 By "turn me down" I meant friendship-wise.
And I thought I was perverted.
558024 but are they underaged though? time flux could make them show up out of the blue older.
Welp.
It June.
Mother.
Fucking.
JUNE.
Where the hell'd ya go, Schmaltz?!
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Blame summer + Diablo 3.
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Oh.
Ohhhh.
I completely understand.
But, you know.
JUNE.
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You know you're getting this story for free, right?
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Yeah. Im just saying I know how it is trying to write something, but then...
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"you haven't lived until you've had one of Spike's pancakes" oh really? My sister HATES grilled cheese sandwiches, won't eat them at all, but she says the one I make are awesome, she still doesn't eat grilled cheese made by anyone else. I challenge Spike to a cook-off!
Maybe her punishment will be to have it taken away so she may never have as much fun again. Or Celestia will get pissed at her for not inviting her again.
Another sexy chapter! I love it! Now I'm starting to find Cheerilee sexy!
I've noticed that Fluttershy's friends have detected a strange taste to her. Maybe the dick is connected to Princess Celestia to make sure she doesn't 'miss out' on any fun?
God bless you a ceerilee chapter.
That was a pretty hot chapter. I liked seeing Cheerilee as a kind of Dominatrix. It suits her well.
2660296 I LOVE it
I feel like big mac is kinda a stallion-whore.
4576947 Seems that sums it up good.