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YEAH YOU USED IT!! :D
sweet, you should really put a little more info on wat happens dude. it was like someone said "stuff happened"
DONT QUESTION THE HEARTS
THEY ARE A SPECIAL MEAL FOR DART
OM NOM NOM
3114410 You gave me idea. Good work.
3114446 Thank you, RaChimera. Hope Terry kicks some more ass in your story and mine.
3114454 Bro, don't mess with me, I'm a damn dinosaur!
3114495 HELL YEAH I DID! I just wanted to give a special treat to you guys.
3114544 Yay, a special meal for me! OM NOM NOM!
Anyone up for mid-rare Spino-steaks with some Griffon Chow Mein on the side?
3116116 I'll have some of that steak.
Griffon, you do not simply kill a velociraptor. You'd get eaten by just shooting it head on. Even just shooting Dart or the gang, that's already a death sentence
This dumb bird can't and shouldn't be considered a hunter. She obviously has no experience, no concept of stealth, can't even shoot worth shit, can't read her prey, has no situational awareness, doesn't once try to use her surroundings to her advantage. She shoots a firearm in the middle of a town full of bystanders. stands there and reloads (a single-shot by the way you described it no less) as one predator charges her, and lets herself get surrounded by the rest of the pack, and is immediately taken down and disarmed with almost no struggle.
She reminds me too much of how a lot of city hunters behave actually. Only go out into the woods to get drunk, shoot shit up, leave trash everywhere, and kill some farmer's mule.
Had one drunk fucker shoot at ME once one season. glad it was shooting black powder only; he was still trying to reload after i had yelled at him twice to get his attention, before just walking over and grabbing it out of his hand. Even if he couldn't hit the ground, if he had tried to unload a semi-automatic at me, i'd have probably dropped him in self defense.
if you decided to kill this dumbass, I wouldn't hold it against you.
"Clever Girl"? you can't use that word. Only WE Can use that word!
Go take a hunter's safety course, spend some time at the target range, go find a group of experienced hunters and stick with them next hunting season. just watch, listen, and learn.
Guns don't kill people. it's the idiot waving the gun around that gets people killed. Ironically, the shooter him or herself included.
not hating on your story here, ADHD scribblings are funny as shit, and actually how a lot of my own attempts at writing have ended up. I just want this antagonist to die, by creative disembowelment or just shooting her own foot (paw/claw/talon) off and bleed out like the inexperienced fucktard she is, or get some real training and experience to be a REAL fucking predator.
then die.
I'd say "Clever Girl". But it was more like "Stupid Griffon".
NOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM
You just had to add clever girl eventually didn't you?
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Of course he did!!!!!