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4561552 Quite the entrance.
4597645 I did.
I can no longer read this story and enjoy it. You stopped making sense fairly soon after Dart went to Canterlot. I have ADD with inattention and I have begun writing a story that makes direct sense in a logical and timely manner as you read it. This fails to manage that. My personal preference to use to to refer to my condition is ADOS. Or attention deficit ooh shiny. Also, you need to start writing linearly. Also known as "this happened, so in response, this happened." Seriously, feels like I am reading three or four stories at once, and one of them was well done while the rest of it is a useless mess of half formed ideas.