This is the story of how Micheal found, took in, and befriended the Cutie Mark Crusaders
AWESOME!!!
A little short for a chapter don't you think?
Might need some work on who is thinking what. At some moments it says
As we panted, Sweetie Bell wanted this from him.
The next says
As I laid on the couch, she got up on me and started to prod her entrance with my member.
4126986 didn't create the chapter it was made by a friend.
Nice. Let's just hope they aren't caught in the morning like that. Also, let's hope that humans and ponies can't interbreed.
Im glad this chapter finally came out.
4127045
So You wanna take my bet eh? Alright i'm game whens the next chapter? We shall see the winner then dear Magic we shall see
4127045 ikinda figured that this wasnt your thing
Nope!!!! Too short; needs more detail and more build-up.
Clop stories, I shall never understand. . .
I find your lack of Star Wars or Star Trek disturbing. . .
4129799 I would believe that this happened as a spur of the moment kind of thing don't you think?
4132478 Probably, but I still want more!!!
4275963 way to be aggressive.
Always watching...
4473433 none taken I got both systems though.
Kinda surprising since this sounds like its happening in THE LIVING ROOM!!! (I was half expecting someone like luna to walk downstairs and just see that and slowly walk back up, like "Kaaaaaay......"
AWESOME!!!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
A little short for a chapter don't you think?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
Might need some work on who is thinking what. At some moments it says
The next says
4126986 didn't create the chapter it was made by a friend.
Nice. Let's just hope they aren't caught in the morning like that. Also, let's hope that humans and ponies can't interbreed.
Im glad this chapter finally came out.
4127045
So You wanna take my bet eh? Alright i'm game whens the next chapter? We shall see the winner then dear Magic we shall see
4127045 ikinda figured that this wasnt your thing
Nope![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
!!!! Too short; needs more detail and more build-up.
Clop stories, I shall never understand. . .
I find your lack of Star Wars or Star Trek disturbing. . .
4129799 I would believe that this happened as a spur of the moment kind of thing don't you think?
4132478
, but I still want more!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
Probably
4275963 way to be aggressive.
Always watching...
4473433 none taken I got both systems though.
Kinda surprising since this sounds like its happening in THE LIVING ROOM!!! (I was half expecting someone like luna to walk downstairs and just see that and slowly walk back up, like "Kaaaaaay......"