Would be nice If folks would upvote if they like it and if they downvote at least leave a comment as to why. I can't fix errors in my writing or story telling if no pony ever tells me what is wrong.

uh oh, tragedy? experience tells me a tragedy tag means it is not going to end well for anyone

4510498 People who downvote without explaining why are cowards. But hey, at least you've got a pretty good like-dislike ratio so far.

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Getting a lot of favs as well, not enough to get front page but next time gadget...next time...

he owed you becuase you saved

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Lysdexia can be an absolute bitch sometimes.

I'm loving the story so far!
I think you have a lot of
Potential as a fic writer.
The only problem I'm having
With the story so far is the amount of
Times you mention Twilight being on
Heat.

Haha twilight sleepy

Is it necessary to read the previous 142k words of Zecora and Fluttershy... whatever it may be? Cause I like Twi and Chryssi, but not big on Flutters and Zecora.

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I add to that question

meh it was pretty good

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No, this is only kind of a side story sequel in the same universe. You could just read the very last chapter of the prequel to this to get an idea of what is going to happen but it's not necessary.

"Twilight sat up slowly, her body may not have been damaged in any way but it aced so much, as if she suddenly had arthritis."
You spelled "ached" wrong.

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Missed it in editing. Thanks for catching it for me.

4515928 Np. For some reason, I had a feeling I had to do this some point today.

....how does a fic of fluttershy getting herbs from zacora turn into a sequel of twilight being the new changeling queen?.......

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The very last chapter of 'Jungle Fever' had Twilight hanging out with a very different Chrysalis than we all know. This is the side story of how that came to be. It is also my first step into other sequels/side stories in the same universe.

4523206 i see.....

Yay 69th like anyway i like where this is going....i demand changling sex as spike watchs cause he is just that badass....no...just no changling sex ok but no spike .....anyway you have a fav from me so make sure you update damn it!

I love Chryslight, I just hope the Tragedy isn't for any of the main characters.

Good clop means good clop or even better.

Hm, green aura, like that of changelings...

Heh, buggy neighbours.

Cya
Raziel-chan

levitated her crow off the table across the room, setting it firmly on her head.

Thank you for the image of Twilight being all regal-like, while trying not to upset the crow perched atop her horn.