We need to know if there well be a dirty threesome with the sun godness hell make a fucking orgy with all the princesses and shing and maybe 2 other changlings nice chapter i can feel true love comming off of this
Let's analyse a situation. Twilight within several years fulfilled duties of the queen, resolved internal political issues, fought against disorders and cared for local population. Her management was so effective that locals fell in love with her as if she was their kin.
In award Chryzalis imposed additional contractual obligations on Twilight: intim services. In the course of a execution of the unequal transaction heavy harm to health of Twilight is done: broken body, cardiological damages, intoxication and the subsequent violent transformation the devil knows in what and probably unwanted impregnation.
It not simply base ingratitude, this is assault in wide scale. By all means Celestia is bitch if she left Twilight to Chrysalis.
Chrysalis is still herself, though changing slowly, she still is at her core functionally evil, you can see this in some f her mannerisms that she tries to (poorly) keep hidden. Also Celestia still has a part to play.
Also Celestia would not have won a confrontation there. Chrysalis has shown before to be nearly on par with her and the addition of thousands of worker and soldier drones around would have been bad.
Additionally I'm not going with the unwanted pregnancy thing. I'm also not trying to write her as perfect, she is still quite manipulative, she IS a changeling after-all, it's kinda her thing.
As intriguing as that may be I'm already stretching myself thin on how far I want to go. The villain in the next chapter makes Chrysalis look like a saint in comparison, a villain that even I didn't like writing.
Maybe in the future I'll make a story starring say, Derpy and her struggle with accepting dinky after an unwanted pregnancy. That seems a bit more doable.
4620369 Also Celestia would not have won a confrontation there. Chrysalis has shown before to be nearly on par with her and the addition of thousands of worker and soldier drones around would have been bad
Wellllll that's not strictly true. That was the writers taking the 'true love conquers all' cliche and turning it on it's head. Her surprise at her tempory victory makes it clear that isn't her normal strength
I think the technical term is 'worfing' but that entire season finale was a giant plot hole filled mess. If she knew she couldn't at least fight Celestia on equal footing she would have never revealed herself but at the same time 1 unicorn guard was enough to push her over.
But then a horribly weakened cadence helps a drained shining win at the last second with a love barrier which Chrysalis says 'what a ridiculous sentiment' despite the fact that said sentiment helped her worf Celestia earlier >.>.
Going on a side tangent though, that entire finale was a mess and the comics being non-canon makes fishing for useful information on how Chrysalis acts and what her real power is difficult. Kinda like dragonball, power levels are stupid inconsistent and only serve are a bad plot point.
4629710 The real Cadence's arrival set a clock on everything. Changelings are a known race to ponies, so with a second Cadence suddenly arriving and showing signs of being imprisoned they would no doubt start testing to see which one was altering her appearence with magic. She couldn't keep hiding, and given how long she'd been draining shining armor's love for Chrysalis was probably having a crazy power trip. She felt like she could take on the world, so she did.
As for a weakened Cadence and Shining armor being able to defeat her, I think the idea was she became overconfident and forgot where all her power came from to begin with. Like most villians her pride was her downfall. The entire episode was a play on the true love cliche.
Can't really speak for the comics, not read them, nor have I watched season 4 yet, but I struggle to see why a creature who knows she's close to or more powerful than Celestia bothers with such an elaborate and unnecessary plan. Or why she isn't already in control of Equestria, invading during any of the thousand years of Luna's banishment where Equestria's power was literally halved.
But ultimatly this is AU and I'm horrifically biased when it comes to Celestia and Luna, so it hardly matters, just wanted to give my two cents on the finale, apologies if I caused any irritation.
NP. I would even say Equestria's power was more than halved during that time as Luna has shown herself to be a better fighter in the flashbacks while Celestia seems to be the better diplomat.
No, it`s homemade. I put the toast in radioactive waste and then eat it. ...You know, I think I`m starting to see the problem. I need to warm up the waste first!
4620155 To be fair, she's also helping Twilight get off after years of holding it back, and from what Twilight's alicorn side had said, not having a partner worth enough stamina would've had disastrous consequences. And Twilight wad clearly uncomfortable with the thought of doing it with her mother figure.
We need to know if there well be a dirty threesome with the sun godness hell make a fucking orgy with all the princesses and shing and maybe 2 other changlings nice chapter i can feel true love comming off of this
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Next 2 chapters are a bit story heavy including a villain that I actually didn't like writing but hey there's also a fight scene too so there's that.
4617099 alright captian if you say so
Let's analyse a situation.
Twilight within several years fulfilled duties of the queen, resolved internal political issues, fought against disorders and cared for local population. Her management was so effective that locals fell in love with her as if she was their kin.
In award Chryzalis imposed additional contractual obligations on Twilight: intim services. In the course of a execution of the unequal transaction heavy harm to health of Twilight is done: broken body, cardiological damages, intoxication and the subsequent violent transformation the devil knows in what and probably unwanted impregnation.
It not simply base ingratitude, this is assault in wide scale. By all means Celestia is bitch if she left Twilight to Chrysalis.
What did just read.... Well, so long sanity. Er, at least what was left of it. ...If there was any left.
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Chrysalis is still herself, though changing slowly, she still is at her core functionally evil, you can see this in some f her mannerisms that she tries to (poorly) keep hidden. Also Celestia still has a part to play.
Also Celestia would not have won a confrontation there. Chrysalis has shown before to be nearly on par with her and the addition of thousands of worker and soldier drones around would have been bad.
Additionally I'm not going with the unwanted pregnancy thing. I'm also not trying to write her as perfect, she is still quite manipulative, she IS a changeling after-all, it's kinda her thing.
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Unwanted pregnancys is one of the most intriguing aspects. Dont throw it out.
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As intriguing as that may be I'm already stretching myself thin on how far I want to go. The villain in the next chapter makes Chrysalis look like a saint in comparison, a villain that even I didn't like writing.
Maybe in the future I'll make a story starring say, Derpy and her struggle with accepting dinky after an unwanted pregnancy. That seems a bit more doable.
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boooring
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Also Celestia would not have won a confrontation there. Chrysalis has shown before to be nearly on par with her and the addition of thousands of worker and soldier drones around would have been bad
Wellllll that's not strictly true. That was the writers taking the 'true love conquers all' cliche and turning it on it's head. Her surprise at her tempory victory makes it clear that isn't her normal strength
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I think the technical term is 'worfing' but that entire season finale was a giant plot hole filled mess. If she knew she couldn't at least fight Celestia on equal footing she would have never revealed herself but at the same time 1 unicorn guard was enough to push her over.
But then a horribly weakened cadence helps a drained shining win at the last second with a love barrier which Chrysalis says 'what a ridiculous sentiment' despite the fact that said sentiment helped her worf Celestia earlier >.>.
Going on a side tangent though, that entire finale was a mess and the comics being non-canon makes fishing for useful information on how Chrysalis acts and what her real power is difficult. Kinda like dragonball, power levels are stupid inconsistent and only serve are a bad plot point.
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The real Cadence's arrival set a clock on everything. Changelings are a known race to ponies, so with a second Cadence suddenly arriving and showing signs of being imprisoned they would no doubt start testing to see which one was altering her appearence with magic. She couldn't keep hiding, and given how long she'd been draining shining armor's love for Chrysalis was probably having a crazy power trip. She felt like she could take on the world, so she did.
As for a weakened Cadence and Shining armor being able to defeat her, I think the idea was she became overconfident and forgot where all her power came from to begin with. Like most villians her pride was her downfall. The entire episode was a play on the true love cliche.
Can't really speak for the comics, not read them, nor have I watched season 4 yet, but I struggle to see why a creature who knows she's close to or more powerful than Celestia bothers with such an elaborate and unnecessary plan. Or why she isn't already in control of Equestria, invading during any of the thousand years of Luna's banishment where Equestria's power was literally halved.
But ultimatly this is AU and I'm horrifically biased when it comes to Celestia and Luna, so it hardly matters, just wanted to give my two cents on the finale, apologies if I caused any irritation.
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NP. I would even say Equestria's power was more than halved during that time as Luna has shown herself to be a better fighter in the flashbacks while Celestia seems to be the better diplomat.
Great work so far, when is the next part coming? I love this alternate universe you have made
4620185 meh Sanity is over rated anyway. Just ask your toaster
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My toaster told me not to trust strangers.
5212138 Is it a KitchenAid? Because you can never believe a word those things say.
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No, it`s homemade. I put the toast in radioactive waste and then eat it. ...You know, I think I`m starting to see the problem. I need to warm up the waste first!
4620155 To be fair, she's also helping Twilight get off after years of holding it back, and from what Twilight's alicorn side had said, not having a partner worth enough stamina would've had disastrous consequences. And Twilight wad clearly uncomfortable with the thought of doing it with her mother figure.
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