You Make Me Smile
Vinyl groaned softly as her eyes fluttered open. Her head was pounding, which only meant one thing. As she had come to predict, once again she had blacked out. As she waited for her eyes to adjust, she realized she was not alone in the bed. Again, this was not something new. Vinyl could feel warm breath close to her muzzle and as she listened to the gentle breathing, she also discovered that her companion’s forelegs were draped possessively around her middle. The unicorn twisted uncomfortably, trying to break the vice grip she found herself in.
“Vinyl?” Asked a familiar voice.
Vinyl froze in place. She would know that melodic voice anywhere. The unicorn quickly whipped around, searching the doorway, ready to provide any sort of excuse to make sure the mare she loved knew this wasn’t what it looked like. As her eyes scanned the room, it took a minute before it became clear the voice had come from beneath her.
“Tavi?” she asked incredulously.
The only response was a soft kiss being planted on her muzzle. Anypony else would have been excited to wake up and find a disheveled Octavia in their bed. But Vinyl had other things on her mind.
“Oh no! Did I hurt you?” Vinyl asked, surveying the bed.
She noticed the fang bites right away. Vinyl reached down and moved her hoof slowly across Octavia’s neck, causing the earth pony to whimper. The wound was freshly caked with blood. Before Octavia had a chance to respond, Vinyl had her in a tight embrace. The vampony quickly ran her hooves up and down the cellist’s body, causing a flustered Octavia to blush. She tried to speak but found her throat was parched.
“Damn it Lyra.” Vinyl murmured, cursing her friend. “I’m going to kill her.”
Vinyl could feel her anger rising. Her fangs shot out quickly. Somepony was going to feel her wrath. As she contemplated all the ways she was going to hurt, maim and torture her supposed best friend, Octavia tried her best to get the unicorn’s attention. Vinyl was so enraged that it took a few good hoof pounds to the chest before she acknowledged Octavia.
“Sorry Tavi. Are you okay?”
Octavia nodded but pointed to her throat. Vinyl understood and a glass of water seemed to materialize from thin air and float directly into Octavia’s outstretched hooves. The cellist drank eagerly, downing the glass in mere seconds. It took a few more moments before she could find her voice.
“Please Vinyl don’t get upset. I’m fine.” She said, grasping the unicorn’s hoof between her own. “Just feeling a little tired.”
Vinyl nodded. She sank her fangs into the flesh just above her hoof. The vampony growled as her own blood pooled up and spilled from her leg. She quickly shoved her foreleg towards Octavia.
“Drink.” She urged. “It will help you recover faster.”
Octavia shook her head. “Vinyl...”
But Vinyl was persistent and Octavia had no energy left to fight. Her eyes opened wide as the vampony blood was fed into her mouth. The cellist instantly felt her energy spike and without another thought she grabbed onto Vinyl’s leg and lapped greedily at her marefriend’s offering. A few moments later Vinyl pulled her leg back, watching Octavia intently.
“Thank you.” Octavia said, stretching her hind legs. “I feel better, but I would have been fine. I can handle myself.”
Vinyl scoffed, enjoying the hint of red that was beginning to paint the front of Octavia’s muzzle.
“Okay well, why don’t you start by telling me exactly what you’ve been up to these past few hours.”
Octavia’s blush only deepened. Vinyl’s eyes narrowed as she went over the facts in her head. She had clearly fed on the cellist, and woken up entangled in her forelegs. She was no stranger to waking up next to the body of a willing fangbanger. Two and two were suddenly thrust together in Vinyl’s mind.
How far had things gone? Had she and Octavia been intimate?
“I hope I didn’t force you to...to...you know.” Vinyl stammered, a lump rising in her throat.
Octavia could only shake her head. “No you didn’t force me; I wanted to be with you.”
Vinyl breathed a momentary sigh of relief, until her marefriend’s words settled in her mind. She was too much of a gentlemare to make the obvious accusation, but as she crossed her front legs over her chest, it was quite obvious the vampony had hurt feelings. Octavia scrambled from her spot and into Vinyl’s lap. The unicorn tried to shun her, but the cellist was persistent.
“Vinyl, I wanted to be with you. I didn’t want you to be with any other mares.” She whispered, leaning her head on Vinyl’s shoulder.
Vinyl tried to stay stoic but Octavia's hooves reaches out and grabbed both sides of her face, forcing her to gaze into her marefriend's tearful eyes. She sighed and reluctantly draped a fore leg over Octavia's back. Vinyl could never stay upset with the earth pony for too long.
Besides was it really cheating if your marefriend slept with your alternate personality?
Doubtful.
Still, before last night the unicorn had yet to sleep with her new marefriend. She couldn’t help but be disappointed that she missed out on remembering their first time together.
“Was DJ PON-3 a good lover?” Vinyl asked, her voice a mixture of curiosity and jealousy.
Octavia smiled sheepishly, before nodding her head. Her entire body shivered just remembering the way DJ PON-3 had dominated her all night long. She was going to be sore for awhile. There was definitely something to be said for vampony stamina. The cellist was actually quite proud that she had managed to keep up with the horny, blood thirsty DJ.
Vinyl groaned and threw herself backwards onto the bed. “I don't like this Tavi. I want to remember loving you.."
Octavia managed to climb on top of her marefriend, straddling Vinyl’s waist as she leaned down and let their muzzles touch.
“Well....” she smiled, batting her eyelashes seductively. “I don’t think I can handle any more rough and naughty this morning. But....” she trailed off.
Vinyl moaned as Octavia’s tongue darted out against her lips, teasing the unicorn.
“I’m ready to try slow and sensual.” The cellist finished, slipping her tongue into her marefriend’s open mouth.
Octavia couldn’t be sure, but from the way Vinyl’s legs encircled her body, and the moans coming from the unicorn’s lips, she was going to take those signs as a yes.
To be continued...
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2846247 lol agreed!
2886486 so true! Vamps are sexy and therefore there needs to be sexy times...I may write a clopfic companion one shot for those who would be interested in the future
2881000 thank u so much!
2880127 your wish is my command lol it's short but it's here!
2878181 I am glad ur enjoying it! I plan to keep the updates coming...even if they have to be shorter!
2863902 let's not forget Adam We! Lol I'm too lazy to link the lite brite image but if ur a family guy can u will get the reference
2847707 okay seriously get out of my head lol ..spoiled alert! Haha this will be my first attempt at some sort of twidash pairing! I look forward to piloting another s.s. ship fic haha
2846732 lol I've been trying to improve with each chapter! I am also really enjoying writing this story....vinyl and octy are my new fave pair haha....I can't wait till the day I can show off ur art for the fine readers here that are enjoying this story lol.....:)
2846304 lol maybe next time...I have a feeling rainbow is cruising for a bruising!
Awww how cute
I have a feeling that you use a Vampire Daries sort of thing for this chapter. Non the less, it made my day 
yay for fluffy chapters!
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No man its written like the true blood series
Is this like a ponyfied true blood story? It's really good man keep it up
2899611 Well, I need to watch that now lol!
faust damn you...TO BE CONTINUED...the most trolly words ever written or spoken. All in all good chapter. I think I see where this is going muwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahhahahhaahhahahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Very cute chapter! I hope that its shortness can only mean that the next one will be out soon!
i must say i was looking up to seeing thi chapter :) but im a little confused ... ill tell ya way, i kinda feel like you mixed vinyls personality with pon-3´s personality, why ? well in the last 3 chapter you made vinyl very elegant, shes was swift and smooth and pretty much had a very similar talking style as octavia ( refined ) in this chapter she feels more like pon-3 a little bit childish and pouty, well i must was that i really like that you made pon-3 act like the normal vinyl and not just be a blood thirsty bastard that could hurt octavia in any moment, i really like that you actually gave her the chance to connect with octavia to.
maybe it because you wanted to post fast :) not much of a big problem, but be careful with that, your giving your characters very good personality, and thats what makes a character likable, im sorry to be to critic some times ... it just i see so much potential in this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x3 and for what i can see your a good writer. ( i was very disappointed with my first vampire pony fanfic, " my room mate is a vampire" it was good at the start but it became so sloppy and cliche at the end :( )
2900403 I should just go with my gut feeling because its usually what u end up telling me anyways hahaha...meaning that after I published this and reread it...I realized I made vinyl more like pon3....I was trying to make her playful but u are correct that I have given them two distinctive personalities and I need to stick with that....I changed the dialogue u referred to....it is 745 in the morning so it's probably not the wittiest lol but it keeps vinyl in character! I appreciate that u pointed that out for me! Thank u :) also I took inspiration from the show "united states of tarA" for pon3's personality....wherein even when the main character's "alters" come out....they always subconsciously care for her family and in their own crazy ways try to protect them (even if it doesn't seem like it at the time)
2900148 yep next one will be a few thousand words longer lol I am already forming ideas in my head....but a nice distraction would be welcome aka the sequel to it takes four to tango...when can I be expecting that kind sir? :)
2899953 lol @ Faust hehe ahhhh count derpula u always make me laugh!
2899619 lol I am using the true blood world as the background for this fic because I found it the most diverse and interesting....I did watch the first season of vampire diaries and it was well done :)
2899615 yep definitely.....true blood's universe, wether u like the show or not is unique because every one knows that vamps exist and they are trying to fit into society....I like how it mirrors our culture when it comes to discrimination of other minorities :)
2899488 the world needs fluff every now and again lol! Thanks for the comment!
More?
I'll say it again, sex is key to vampire stories. XD. Now I want more.
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Welll, it'll be on the way; I'm writing an OctaScratch clopfic, meanwhile (two, in fact!
This is one of those fics that teeters on the line between Mature and Teen.
2901119 this is true.....but as long as nothing is explicitly described....I think I can get away with walking the line hehehehehehe
keep it up and don't take so long
! I love it
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I feel like throughout all of this they're either anthro or standing on their hind legs.But that's just my opinion loving it so far though.
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Agreed on both accounts