hahahahaha, little ponies thought they could hurt it. its so cute. it's best to not attack something that obviously has enough tech to space travel and is twice your size.
well, could be worse... 'least he didn't skin them their were several words that you accidentally doubled, but its all good. by the way, is his "plasma caster" shoulder-mounted or hand-held like in Requiem? and, no Shuriken's or throwing disk's? great work! keep it up, hope to see more soon!
2827275 It's shoulder mounted. The handheld plasma caster from Requiem is called the Plasma Cannon, which will be featured later in the story along with the net gun, Shuriken, Throwing disc, and sword. So don't you worry son. I GOT THIS SHIT! Thanks for the view!
2828269 I DO WHAT I WANT! Just kidding. To be completely honest, I WAS going to make the plasma white but I thought that white was.... a little bland, so I thought, hey, RED. I hope besides that your enjoying the story, thanks for the view!
well then this is just awesome! you have earned yourself a fav though i must admit i was a little nervous when reading the first chapter dont worry it has nothing to do with the quality of the chapter, its just that im always like that with crossovers (since ive read a lot of bad ones) but anyway this defenetly deserves a like and fav
Is he using his mask to speak? Because it's extremely difficult for a being with no lips to produce human or pony words. I do know that there have been Yautja that spoke English but only in small sentences and usually straight to the point
There's a big issue involving the words 'where' 'we're' and 'were'. 'Where' is when desribing the location of something. 'We're' is the contraction of we are. And 'were' is the past tense of be. There's also the issue of you using "Im" instead of 'I'm'. You're missing the ' mark.
so... predator and sex? guess i should check this one out.
hahahahaha, little ponies thought they could hurt it. its so cute. it's best to not attack something that obviously has enough tech to space travel and is twice your size.
waits for roar... waits for roar
NO ROAR?! THIS IS MADNESS!
Sweeeet.
Wow I like the story even more
well, could be worse... 'least he didn't skin them
their were several words that you accidentally doubled, but its all good. by the way, is his "plasma caster" shoulder-mounted or hand-held like in Requiem? and, no Shuriken's or throwing disk's?
great work! keep it up, hope to see more soon!
Ace out!
2827275 It's shoulder mounted. The handheld plasma caster from Requiem is called the Plasma Cannon, which will be featured later in the story along with the net gun, Shuriken, Throwing disc, and sword. So don't you worry son. I GOT THIS SHIT!
Thanks for the view!
Fun Fact if his plasma caster is hotter it should produce white plasma not red.
2828269 I DO WHAT I WANT!
Just kidding. To be completely honest, I WAS going to make the plasma white but I thought that white was.... a little bland, so I thought, hey, RED.
I hope besides that your enjoying the story, thanks for the view!
Awesome!
well then this is just awesome! you have earned yourself a fav though i must admit i was a little nervous when reading the first chapter dont worry it has nothing to do with the quality of the chapter, its just that im always like that with crossovers (since ive read a lot of bad ones) but anyway this defenetly deserves a like and fav
I shall fav this to track it and see how it is.
Is he using his mask to speak? Because it's extremely difficult for a being with no lips to produce human or pony words. I do know that there have been Yautja that spoke English but only in small sentences and usually straight to the point
4672074 Predator>Real Life Humans>Aliens>Movie Humans>Ponies
There's a big issue involving the words 'where' 'we're' and 'were'. 'Where' is when desribing the location of something. 'We're' is the contraction of we are. And 'were' is the past tense of be. There's also the issue of you using "Im" instead of 'I'm'. You're missing the ' mark.