i only read the first paragraph. PLEASE refrain from using the the fraise:"The main six" its fanon and it bucks the hell out of me. that is all for now. i will read the rest now.
omg you fucking did it i think its called Lavender unicorn syndrome. Your fic, or maybe just this chapter, suffers from it. thats all for now, good chapter Btw
Hey guys hope you enjoyed the latest chapter. I just want say yet again that I'm sorry this took so long and I will do my best to get chapters out faster. Please leave comments and likes if you like the story so far. Also if you could do this it would be greatly appreciated: spread the story around as I would love to be more known and to have more feedback from fans of both predator and mlp. Thank you for the views
Meh, I didn't like this chapter, tbh. I think I know where this is going, he'll be brought to Ponyville and will become friends -to some extend- with the main six. Then Princess Celestia will show up and she'll be all high and mighty causing this guy to be like 'bitch please'.
3603308 If tour worried that he's going to turn soft and mooshy to them, you can put that fear to rest. At most he will tolerate them. Later ( way later) he may think more of them then just annoyances. Sorry you didn't like the chapter, hopefully you'll like the next one.
How... how!!! The yaajita were made to be hunters from when they were born! They keep up with things 10 times the speed of manticores and quieter too!! I'm questioning this guy's rank.
The alpha male and female fell asleep as the two smaller Manticores played with each other. They chased each other around the flat area when the smallest one noticed something on the ground. Three red dots. The cat was intrigued about the lights but was still unsure to go near it. The red dots began to move towards the Manticore, slowly but steadily. Gaining some courage, it walked towards the lights. The cub stretched its paw out and patted the dots. It then smelt something burning. It smelled the air, trying to find the source of the smell, not paying attention to the the red dots which were now on its forehead. Out of no where, a red ball hurdled towards the manticore, causing its head to explode upon impact. The two alphas awoke from their slumber and rushed towards their fallen member. The three remaining Manticores came together and ran into the brush, straight towards the main sixes camp.......
Woah, killing cubs? That's sounds something a bad blood would do. The yautja go after what provides a challenge. A cub is equivalent to a human with no weapon.
does he not have any of those healing-type crystals on him?
i only read the first paragraph. PLEASE refrain from using the the fraise:"The main six" its fanon and it bucks the hell out of me. that is all for now. i will read the rest now.
omg you fucking did it
i think its called Lavender unicorn syndrome. Your fic, or maybe just this chapter, suffers from it. thats all for now, good chapter Btw
hope so those crystal are sure handy
I think this is beginning to become a cliche
Hey guys hope you enjoyed the latest chapter.
I just want say yet again that I'm sorry this took so long and I will do my best to get chapters out faster.
Please leave comments and likes if you like the story so far.
Also if you could do this it would be greatly appreciated: spread the story around as I would love to be more known and to have more feedback from fans of both predator and mlp.
Thank you for the views
Meh, I didn't like this chapter, tbh.
I think I know where this is going, he'll be brought to Ponyville and will become friends -to some extend- with the main six.
Then Princess Celestia will show up and she'll be all high and mighty causing this guy to be like 'bitch please'.
Prove me wrong, make this good.
3603308
If tour worried that he's going to turn soft and mooshy to them, you can put that fear to rest. At most he will tolerate them. Later ( way later) he may think more of them then just annoyances.
Sorry you didn't like the chapter, hopefully you'll like the next one.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Peui0uahCcY
How... how!!! The yaajita were made to be hunters from when they were born! They keep up with things 10 times the speed of manticores and quieter too!! I'm questioning this guy's rank.
Woah, killing cubs? That's sounds something a bad blood would do. The yautja go after what provides a challenge. A cub is equivalent to a human with no weapon.