A sixteen year old kid is hunted and shot, left for dead in a forest next to a small town, when suddenly six young, beautiful girls appear from nowhere and helps him. Now he awakes in a strange land, surrounded by anthropomorphized ponies. OC HiE.
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y u make nuther pinkie pie
another very good chapter.
I feel like there's a contradiction but I can't put my finger on it...
Anyway this story has gone from weird to crazy that nothing makes sense anymore and it's not the funny kind of crazy either. How come the girls aren't coming and why..... I just don't understand where this story is going anymore other than what he's supposed to do.
2912715 I have plans for future chapters. Plus, would you really risk six innocent girls to send out to fight an undead horde when you have a group (Not specifying numbers yet.) of ponies, plus a powerful knight/warrior to lead them. He may have doubts, but it may turn out to be okay. *cough* Not really.
He better get some sweet ass powers.
2913116 STAY AWAY SCHVEIN! YOU KNOW TOO MUCH!!!
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Sorry I was hanging out with Pinkie
2913221 Did you meet Daniel himself? He spends most of his free time with Pinkie actually, just some weekends go for Fluttershy.
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No mackhail took over when I walked in so I got scared and ran. Bad expierience with pinkamena so I will stay away from insane characters.
2913259 Ah... Sorry for that. Mikhail is a douchebag. It's easy to tell both of them apart.
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That guy's luck is going to run out sooner or later and the ponies are going to rut him to death....anytime now...anytime.... (stares)
That's kinda sad his father wanted him dead but that's what going to happen sometimes. My great great uncle Joe "The Boss" (can't properly pronounce nor spell his last name) didn't kill any family members but if you pissed him off, hehe you were dead.
Why the heck would rainbow get to go first when he's dating fluttershy?
Great... A schizophrenic. Like we don't already have one.
Ok while I was reading I noticed your paragraphs switching from first person to third even when starting a dialoge for a character be sure to fix it up.....I'm just saying not demanding
"Eventually, humans will be destroyed as a whole, whether or not it be natural disasters or because humans just killed each other without pity or remorse."
Laughs in schutzstaffel