Page generated in 0.033 seconds
Total duration
729 users online
1,084,176 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
damn! And I was just about to finish a new chapter for one of my fics until this awesome stuff came up.
Please produce more of this great story!
now this is FAAAANNTTAAASSTTIIIIIICCCCC
Several workers in an office were staring as one of their own suddenly had a stroke in the break room.
where did you come up with an idea like that to put in the story?
AND THE SEASON 2 FINALE STARTS! WITH MARK!
3699356 idk how he thought of it but it was hilarious, and that's all that matters, right?
First he is British (in the USMC) now he is part Irish (use of 'Bloody' and 'Lass')
Also, the story seem to be all over the place. For starters, he is just meeting allof the Mane 6 now?!
Overall it is a pretty good story, a bit hard to read sometimes.
Alright, so first he gets injured and just calls it a god damn fleshwound and ignores it. Then Applejack instantly falls for him and constantly blushes. Changes his mind about telling them about his life and tells them everything. No one seemed to notice his cutiemark before he turned back either.
And lastly, you brought religion into your story and the character failed to mention that it is a belief and not a truth that heaven or hell exists, so the goddamn ponies will think otherwise. Oh, and Twilight forgot that he's being hunted down by her teacher.
I'm giving this one my chance, but the story just seems completely improbable and it losing the momentum it had fast. You get get a reader to believe the impossible, but they will doubt the improbable.
I've read this multiple times,and STILL will never understand this.
4690278 I belive whoever was barny just had a stroke from high-five
I think this says that he thought Spike
Hey! Australia isn't hell! It's just hot as fuck!
Eh, what am I talking about. Australia's a clusterfuck.
5396098 oi screw you I live in this clusterfuck you ass XD
5396098 of course it's a cluster, because not only is it hot as hell, but everything - including even the f**king plants - wants to kill you, or make you it's special new friend. Not necessarily in that order.