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Have clop, two chapters, and a happy 4th of July if you aren't an American. FOR THOSE WHO DO, MERRY INDEPENDENCE DAY!!!
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Alright. At least you didn't say that it was complete and utter shite without telling me why you liked the story. In my slight defense, I had shitty writing talent back when I first started.
Whatever you do after moving on from this admittedly wtf fanfic, I hope you succeed.
Well... I don't normally enjoy foalcon out of principle... but... starting with the fact that I forgot his alternate form was a female filly... I will admit that this was pretty well-written.
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Body of a filly, mentality of an immature Marine.
4641530 Yeah... the WHY!?!?!?! boner strikes again.
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Its not gonna be the only boner you get, either.
4645391 well...shiiiiit......
da fuck I just read? I read through all the chapters and it seems all of them are always on the move. There are more conversation(s) with the humans then there are with the ponies, don't get me wrong there are few chapters that have daww moments and a few chuckles but give each character a break man give them air to breath with their love ones each one. But other then that this story not my cup of tea and one way to exit this story is this
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4672368 this story ain't for everyone, and I'm sad that you didn't like it, but I won't be able to please everyone. As to the humans being featured more often, I'll try to show the ponies more!
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YOU SIR have given me an Idea!!
Oh Celestia ! Oh Celestia ! Oh CelestiAAAAAA !!! * Panting and sweating like a Horse * I-I need to ch-ch-change my panty's ! I th-think I got hit by that Love gun too ? * Princess Nightmare Moon pops in * "Oh my STARS and Moon !" "What happened to you my little filly ? " * I point a wet shaky hoof towards sand Dune and Applejack * Princess , I couldn't help myself * I also point my soaked wet hoof at the aurthor / writer *