Agh chapter 46 is kicking my ass! There are so many friggin long convos! Don't get me wrong, they're all important, but uuuggghhh! I think that's been one of the main challenges with writing KOTD, is all the different emotions this novel has. A lot of it I REALLY have to be in the mood. Some chapters are me "venting" after having a nasty panic attack or just old memories from my PTSD.

I said I'd speak about alicorns and so I shall. If there was ever an argument to be made against the rule of alicorns I think that the ponies of Equestria could make a clear and decisive case for it. It's not that they've generally meant ill will toward their subjects, it's just that they don't really do anything worthy of their lofty status as rulers.

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Despite the best efforts of Nightmare Eclipse, she could never seem to prevent the one mortal in all creation she had ever feared from returning to the world. And neither could Discord, even once he realized attempting to team with him to stop his tormentor was a fools game. And trying to keep HIM out was the one thing they EVER agreed on.

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So I've had a lot of stuff go down recently. My roommates and I are putting up a friend who's fleeing an abusive relationship and it's ...well a bit taxing. since she doesn't have a car. I'm working on the next chapter, but I've hit a snag, mostly due to having no idea how to "write" music. Like how do I describe an entire song, even if it's just drums? Well anyways, next chapter might be a bit late. Thanks for your patience!

Futa Cadence x Gleaming Shield (Multiple Chapters)

or

Latex Spitfire 'tortured' (loosely using the term) by the Shadowbolts. (Multi-Chapters)
(Basically based on KRDs universe and images where she's mean to Spitfire😂🤣)

or

Evil Spitfire (Humiliation, Human in Equestria.)

????????

Here have some Best Pony.

I thought it would take me longer to edit this, being 6k words long, but it was rather easy. No major edits. A few clumsy worded sentences here and there. Found like...one typo. Otherwise besides the repeated uses of "I did this" and "I did that" I'm rather happy with this chapter.

So after dealing with a lot of financial crap, work was like "Go take a huge ass vacation."

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Chapter 39

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Chapter 33:
I spruced up the descriptions some, and changed some wording. A lot of it sounded unclear and awkward so it should flow better now.

Chapter 34:
There were a decent amount of typos and I was rather shocked. They were all technically words, so it might explain why spellcheck didn't catch them. Same deal as before, some descriptions were kind of unclear, and I added in some extra imagery.

Eh, saw several annoying typos and a few places to spruce up the wording. Also there were some unclear actions I was able to tidy up, nothing too serious imo.

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I really like these guys. More after the cut.

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This was a longer and more difficult chapter. I spruced up the descriptions and general formatting. there was some stuff that I felt could have been described or worded better. At the end, I added in a character and put in a few more things with General Versa. I might add a bit more later, but for now I'm content with it.

Exactly what the title says! Chapter 40: Trial By Fire part 4

Best typo in KOTD: "She grabs the back of his head and holds it still, as she drives a knee spike into his forehead. She shoves his dad bod away." Christ that's been in there this entire time

God I love writing action, but it can get so annoying. Do you know how hard it is to condense a scene to as few words as possible, while everything still keeps at an intense, clear pace?

1. Luna

2. Cadence

3. Sunny

4. Opaline

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Grading Scale:

A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)

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Because nobody likes it when you spoil their surprises.

And as Pinkie Pie told Twilight Sparkle way back in 'Green Isn't Your Colour,' there's no faster way to lose a friend's trust than to break a promise and share her or his secret.

Well, secrets are what this episode is about.

Or one secret in particular.

One which, in the audience's case, was at least partially spoiled in the merch ages ago. The secret in question?

Cadence and Shining Armour are going to have a baby.

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These were commissioned at request. So I REALLY hope you all enjoy them! Be sure to tell the artist what you think!

http://karmadash.deviantart.com/art/Pony-POV-7-Wedding-564267755

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Spoilers. You know the drill.

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