Depth in Innocence Contest 42 members · 12 stories

Entries for the Depth in Innocence contest. To submit a story just put it in the folder.

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I’m just here to have a valiant attempt. I have competition, but I just want to have fun.

UC #9 · May 7th, 2020 · · ·

pew! pew! pew!

this is a good contest idea though

(takes laser gun and fires. Pew-pew!)

436894 I still consider you more of a writer than I am, so don't throw your laser gun into the corn yet.

As for writing, yes, I guess it's both a curse and a blessing. A blessing because it drives me, a curse because it makes me bleed over the keyboard.

I'm sure you'll do great. You'll probably even win. You seem to be good at it, so all I'm really expecting is to get one more view on my most neglected story. Someone has got to read it to assess it. I hope they enjoy it.

As for you, would it be in vain for me to hope that you'll enjoy the writing process too? Whatever your feelings for it are, I think it will always be a part of you. That's up to you whether you look at that as a blessing or a curse. For you, maybe it's both.

435775 Hey, friend. Sorry I've been out of touch for a bit.

Good news: I got back into writing, a little.
Bad news: We seem to be competitors in this contest. I've just submitted The Ultimate Supreme Administrator.

I’m pretty proud of this story and its message, might as well try.

I got a mostly completed story already that seems to fit your qualifications. It even says in the story's first chapter "Keep it E-rated". I'll let you read it to find out why.

The story is called "My Little Detour", and yes . . . I'll submit it to the folder too. This one is a sequel to another story of mine, "Sky Dancer, the First Flying Unicorn" which is, itself, mostly innocent story. The only reason I gave it a T rating is just for a few gory scenes on two chapters out of 31, but that one is too long for the contest anyway. Nevertheless, I'd love to get an opinion on it for those who care to read it.

"My LIttle Detour" definitely has lots of spoilers within it in relation to its parent story, but it can stand on its own. It has a beginning, middle, and end (I'm planning on posting the final chapter next Monday, February 17th, well before the deadline of the contest).

It's a cute and mostly innocent story about a young foal who is trying to find out more about herself, her father, and her place in the world. However, in pursuit of her goals, she should be careful what she wishes for.

If for some reason the story does not quality, I'd still appreciate an opinion on it. It has no comments so far.

You know what I have nothing to lose, let's do this

Hooray! I am here!

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