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I was going to do some work today and you publish a chapter, why?
Glad to see the Elpis' adventures continue! This one surely was a blast, both with the fight and then the more slice-of-life moment. I'm glad to see all is settled with Nibble
Do'h! I am clearly too rusty if I can't figure out that F.F.I is Flim Flam Industries, and those guys stealing Stable-tec tech... Ohh this is going to be glorious!
Nitpick:
"A saw blade flew through the air following the path of magic aura and decapitated the raider. I started to piece together how Gale’s aim spell might work." Show don't tell. With how you else are good at explaining things is this really clunky.
Hes not a godless heathen he just dosent belive in celestia