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Why does that one pony in the picture have a pin for a cutie mark?
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That's a scalpel.
Really nice touch with the whole "imagining the story" thing so it wouldn't be an awfully dry segment. I can remember reading Lord of the Rings and coming to the multiple page long segment where the history of the ring was told, and it was so fucking dry that I wanted to drink a desert for comfort.
I really don't get the hate for the water weapon. I mean you have tons of ammo laying around, sure it weigh a bit, but so does the gear that you would need to make bullets on the go. The idea is really nice, and I must admit that I have toyed around with the idea of a griffin faction using steampunk weapons, steam powered muskets and shotguns galore, so its nice finally seeing some steam powered toys in the wasteland… Even if the steam there gets compacted into the ball would turn into water when it cools down, but that is a minor detail By the way, ever watched Steamboy? If the science is true in that story would you actually leave a bit of ice behind at the point of impact, something about energy compressing and decompressing.
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Glad you liked it! I saw Steamboy once a long time ago so my details of ok how the stuff worked is fuzzy at best.
Interesting, I can bet the next chapter is going to be really tense! Also, that dream sequence was pretty close to some of the most bizzare and scary things I have ever read.
I also wonder, how did the buffalo survive the war? It seems like they are still quite close to Equestria to escape the fallout.
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Glad you enjoyed! How I imagined it they seemed to live outside of Equestria and their traditional march just brought them through Equestria. That way when the war started they were relativity left out of it.