Update! · 7:33am Jun 6th, 2022
Hey guys! Been a while! Good news, the current chapter is in production! Its about 2000 words at the moment, but I've been really motivated to work on it. Its just been really busy with work and my friend got married (I was in the bridal party and her fiancé, also a friend of mine, was working in another part of the country the 6 months before hand, so I was trying to help out as much as possible.) That being said, I figured I'm in the mood to lore drop!
I'm taking suggestions. Right now I want to talk about the human characters in my story. This lore is stuff that's hinted about in the story but not fully explored. So let me know if you guys want to hear about Lemon Zest, Moon Dancer, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Indigo Flash, Sugar Coat, Kamikaze, or any of the characters from Crystal Prep, then let me know in the comments! This will help grease my creativity gears, sorta speak!
Take care guys!
I want to know how the students of Crystal prep reacted to Twilight leaving. Did she say goodbye at all, did she return to get her things? Or did she just dissapear and never show her face again leaving them all to wonder what happend? I know Lemon Zest and Moondancer cared for her on some level so her leaving would have come as somwhat of a shock.
I want to know what the reactions would be to the fact that Twlight, the descendent of Final Stand would be freinds with monsters from her former classmates?
Given that in most stories Star Swirl is Celestia and Luna teacher, I would like to see how that relationship between them worked if he was a wizard and they there vampires?
Going off topic, may I suggest that if news about Twlight befriending monsters became public, along with her connection with Final Stand how about seeing Luna's reaction and response (in my head Celestia is already aware of the connection between them as having the name Twlight a name of the family who claims decadent from Final Stand and not hide the fact would alert her but wants to not let the past could the future)?
oOoo, definitely something on moon and lemon, was liking twilight's interactions with them
more on shining/cadance would be neat too
Some biography about those characters. Their families (Sunny related to Sassy Saddles?), what they like and dislike, subjects they are good at and those that they like, maybe their relationship with other Shadowbolts and Twilight. I would leave their reaction to monsters for the story if it ever happen, be it a surprise.
We know a bit about Lemon Zest's issues. Not sure how well this would fit in the current plot, but reading some more about Moondancer would be pretty cool. Some flashbacks of Shining's time at Crystal Prep could be cool too. Also, it'd be fun to see if any of the other students have secret monster friends as well I think. On another note, not sure how much this would fit your requirement, but im curious what Sunset's life was like before she was adopted if whe remembers at all. (Also, hope you had fun at the bridal party! I've only ever been to one, and it was more on the traditional side)
I, too, am interested in Luna’s reaction to finding out Twilight’s ancestry. But I’m also very interested in the girls finding out too. Especially if there’s another sleepover and it’s post-scary story time or maybe during it, and Twilight just lets that one drop.
Moon dancer and Lemon do need resolution I feel. I almost would rather them have to hunt Twilight down and they find her with her friends and are just gobsmacked.l than have her tell them. Though since discord exists it should probably be less dramatic than that. ;_; So maybe a lore drop isn’t needed for them.
I’ve got a weird time sense about this world. On one hand you have some time lengths in to 200 years area that humans have stopped living in the under city. Is twilights family’s taste in eating rat then like, genetic memory? Or maybe I just need a quick timeline spelled out because I don’t brain so good.
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Do you think that Celestia is aware of who Twilight is related to and what do you think Twilight's grandmother will do when she realizes her grandson is marrying not just a monster but the adopted niece of Celestia?
Moondancer would say, "damn the education quality, i wanna be with my friend."
At least, that's how she strikes me both in canon and in this story.
I've reread this story a lot (might start reread number 10 soon lol) and I don't get the impression that twilight's friends understand just how bad twilight was bullied by Kamikaze, except maybe pinkie cause of the whole her being stuck behind the school walls deal. Maybe that could be explored a bit more but over all this is still easily my favorite story on fimfiction.