Feb
5th
2022
Short and Long Descriptions · 1:27am Feb 5th, 2022
I have changed the short and long descriptions on the story. A forum poster pointed out reasonably that my descriptions seem to give away everything about the story, and won’t entice new readers because they think they understand what will happen. The new descriptions evoke a sense of mystery and hopefully will intrigue new readers. What do you think?
Tip of the hat to Crimmar for an excellent forum post.
(Comment #134 on this page: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/50/the-writers-group/thread/487779/down-vote-bots#page/3)
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· Story: The Enforcer and Her Blackmailers (Enhanced & Augmented)
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#Long description
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#new readers
#mystery
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