Story review: #28 The Sun and the Star —by General Alduin
Characters:
Sunset Shimmer: I really like the way you highlight who Sunset is in this story it feels very organic. And I appreciate the amount of characterization we get for her in such a short run-time.
Starlight Glimmer: This alternate human version of Starlight is interesting….
Story Review #24 A Shimmering Heartbreak —by Spyder27
Reward for winning a competition in the Sunset X Villain competition group and a continuation of the previous story I reviewed making this the logical next step plus I kinda wanted to see where this went.
Looks awesome my friend did you draw it or a friend?
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An artist who I asked for permission from.
I’m sucky drawer 😅
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i am too my friend made mine and one of my story pictures XD
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Cool
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