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BezierBallad


Pharynx is best changeling. CHANGE MY MIND.

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Aug
7th
2021

I wanna send this to Equestria Daily… · 11:12pm Aug 7th, 2021

…but they’ll probably shoot it down because “grammar and phrasing”.

Comments ( 9 )

It's still good

5565524
I know. But it’s happened twice already, so I’m not gonna try it a third time.

5565526
Okay. Just saying, it's a good story

5565528
Heh. Thanks. I appreciate it.

Fortunately, I am leaning towards creating a group for the Plot Hole. Perhaps after I finish this story.

Took me three times to get A Deer Named John approved there and a whole bunch of editing/clean up; even a complete re-write of the opening. Hard but it can be worth it.

5565544
This story does have tons of spelling and grammar errors whenever the Plot Hole residents speak, but they’re there for a reason.

5565547
Talking it over with the person assessing it may help them in taking that into consideration.

Personal opinion: If it is the way the characters speak then it shouldn't be knocked down for that. That is simply showing them to be in character.

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