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Angel Midnight


maybe in a world of odd people and odd things, I'm not so odd after all. But who knows. (they/them)

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Apr
16th
2021

Very soon, the first story of Sombra's Bat will be over... · 6:12pm Apr 16th, 2021

I have a few rough ideas for the next story, but I'm stuck on one little detail that arguably the entire story depends on.

A title. :rainbowlaugh:

Yup, no idea what the story is actually going to be called. I was thinking of something along the lines of Fire and Shadows but I'm not sure as I want to go with that now.
*cough cough*
Hello, Sombra.
I have a question, Angel.
Not sure where this is going, but ok...
Why am I not in the title of the next story in the series?
Your name is in the first story's title and I've made you a main character. Is that not enough for you?
No. Fix it before-
*fixes 4th wall so Sombra can't keep muttering nonsense and making empty threats*
Ah, that's better.

So if you have any ideas, I'm all ears.

Hugs for awesome possums,
~ Angel

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Comments ( 9 )

Your title does represent what your story is going to be about. Fire and Shadows is a good one considering it’s one I never seen or heard before. Now when I see the title I think of death and tragedy is going to happening in the story like in your other story.
This is all can say, can’t help much.

You do you. Do what feels best for your story. Other people can give better advice than me because I’m not a writer myself (yet).

5499039
Thanks for the advice. :twilightsmile:

5499043
No problem. But like I said before, other people can give better advices me. What I told you was all I know of about writing a fanfic.

5499047
It's still helped me, though. :pinkiesmile:

As I'm sure my man Marshall Mathers would say, "If it's over, it's over."

5499066
Ah, but it's not over. It's not really the end of the tale at all. It's just the end of the first story. There's still a lot that needs to be resolved, but I couldn't fit it all into one story. Ending Sombra's Bat at this point just... feels right. It's hard to explain.

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Kinda like how Chris Brown was gonna have two CDs for F.A.M.E. but he decided to make a new CD in Fortune

yea i get it

How about Through the Fire and the Shadows?

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