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Phantomdust


Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.

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  • 141 weeks
    My Resignation

    It is with great reluctance I must announce that I am discontinuing Technology is Magic and The Nightmare Technomancer. My tagline on my profile is “Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.” Well, I’m just not enjoying it anymore and I know that if I force myself to continue, the story will suffer for it. I will be the first to admit that I made mistakes while writing this. I’m

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  • 143 weeks
    Should Pixel die in the rewrite of Chapter 27?

    Okay chapter 27 and 28 weren't as well received as I hoped (especially chapter 28). I'll readily admit I made some mistakes with them so I'm going to rewrite them in order to fix those mistakes. In the new version, Pixel will be the one to be shredded by Natura instead of Gerhardt. So should she die in chapter 28 while Gerhardt is trying to fix her? Or should she live but suffer some sort

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  • 147 weeks
    Demigod experiments question.

    So I'm thinking in the next chapter I'll have Gerhardt conduct an experiment in an attempt to use what he learned from scanning Celestia and Luna to use necromancy to create the soul of a demigod. I have a few different ideas of how this could possibly go, but I wanted to ask what you all think first. Should he fail? Should he succeed? If he succeeds should it move on to the afterlife as he

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  • 151 weeks
    Time skip?

    I'm having a bit of trouble coming up with filler to pad out the story, as you may have been able to tell by the past couple of chapters. So I'm thinking of having a bit of a time skip a couple of months ahead all the way to winter. Would you guys mind if I did so? I mean if you don't want me to, I can keep trying my best to come up with a bit more filler. After all a season only lasts about

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    1 comments · 169 views
  • 163 weeks
    Which version of Chpt 16 do you want?

    I have multiple versions of chapter 16 that I've thought of and have partially written out.

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    2 comments · 157 views
Dec
27th
2020

Question. Gods fighting or no? · 4:50am Dec 27th, 2020

Quick question for anyone who cares. Would you guys find it interesting if another lesser god were to side with the Human Kingdom against Silvanus, or if multiple gods sided with the Human Kingdom while multiple other gods sided with Silvanus essentially sparking a war that divides the lower levels of their pantheon in half? Or should the rest of the gods remain neutral? Also, on a mostly unrelated note, would you like to see the god(s) of the MLP universe get involved with the story at all?

If yes to the first idea, then what type of god? I was considering a god or goddess of technology as a sort of classic clash between nature vs technology, but since people seem to have drawn parallels between this story and Warhammer 40k I'm not so sure about that one. I mean if you have gods of technology then you have to have spirits of technology and well... You see my problem with that idea?

Now I obviously don't have any issue with the W40k memes, in fact I love Warhammer and find them absolutely hilarious! That being said, I'm really not trying to make a story about a universe that's just a crappy off brand knock off of Warhammer 40k. If I was then I wouldn't have bothered making up my own universe and would have just made a W40k crossover with a Magos Dominus that accidentally ended up getting sucked into a warp portal during a daemonic invasion or something. So yeah, I'm thinking I'm probably not going to be including any machine gods or spirits of any sort. At least I think I would prefer not to unless people seem to want it and have no issues with it.

As for the other two questions, I think I can figure out how to incorporate a large scale war between a whole bunch of gods on my own. Same in regards to figuring out how to actually get the gods of the MLP universe to give enough of a crap to bother getting involved with petty mortal affairs. After all the sudden rise of power of three or four demigods could be a really good motivator to get them curious as to just what the hell is going on down there.

Anyways, thank you! Any input would be quite helpful!

Stay safe out there everyone!

Comments ( 4 )

Well, since you made "Gears" as the ponies want to call it hahaha, let it be known that there are forest spirits in the EverFree, it gave me the guidelines to think that somehow the gods of MLP were going to get involved, now ... I can't help but notice that basically all the gods of MLP would have to be absolutely furious against ponies, especially against Moon and Celestia, considering that they have the of pet stars, which from any angle creates imbalance to the planet.

Celestia and Gerhardt forever !!!

Why not i would like to see some action :v

I haven't read the story yet, but it got my attention, I may read it later, also as to involving other gods, if you do add a god/goddess of technology, I suggest this deity being very young-like as they recently became a part of the pantheon and most likely assist humanity.

I also suggest another deity much older, a god of weapons who's been around since the first weapon was created and he'll stay neutral - as to why, surprise me.

Anyway, your story idea seems pretty cool, I'll keep tabs on it from now on.

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