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Phantomdust


Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.

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  • 138 weeks
    My Resignation

    It is with great reluctance I must announce that I am discontinuing Technology is Magic and The Nightmare Technomancer. My tagline on my profile is “Always enjoy writing or your stories will suffer as you do.” Well, I’m just not enjoying it anymore and I know that if I force myself to continue, the story will suffer for it. I will be the first to admit that I made mistakes while writing this. I’m

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  • 140 weeks
    Should Pixel die in the rewrite of Chapter 27?

    Okay chapter 27 and 28 weren't as well received as I hoped (especially chapter 28). I'll readily admit I made some mistakes with them so I'm going to rewrite them in order to fix those mistakes. In the new version, Pixel will be the one to be shredded by Natura instead of Gerhardt. So should she die in chapter 28 while Gerhardt is trying to fix her? Or should she live but suffer some sort

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    2 comments · 239 views
  • 144 weeks
    Demigod experiments question.

    So I'm thinking in the next chapter I'll have Gerhardt conduct an experiment in an attempt to use what he learned from scanning Celestia and Luna to use necromancy to create the soul of a demigod. I have a few different ideas of how this could possibly go, but I wanted to ask what you all think first. Should he fail? Should he succeed? If he succeeds should it move on to the afterlife as he

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    6 comments · 262 views
  • 148 weeks
    Time skip?

    I'm having a bit of trouble coming up with filler to pad out the story, as you may have been able to tell by the past couple of chapters. So I'm thinking of having a bit of a time skip a couple of months ahead all the way to winter. Would you guys mind if I did so? I mean if you don't want me to, I can keep trying my best to come up with a bit more filler. After all a season only lasts about

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  • 159 weeks
    Which version of Chpt 16 do you want?

    I have multiple versions of chapter 16 that I've thought of and have partially written out.

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Aug
23rd
2021

Should Pixel die in the rewrite of Chapter 27? · 11:02pm Aug 23rd, 2021

Okay chapter 27 and 28 weren't as well received as I hoped (especially chapter 28). I'll readily admit I made some mistakes with them so I'm going to rewrite them in order to fix those mistakes. In the new version, Pixel will be the one to be shredded by Natura instead of Gerhardt. So should she die in chapter 28 while Gerhardt is trying to fix her? Or should she live but suffer some sort of complication like Gerhardt did in the original version? I'm asking because I would rather avoid making another mistake and having to rewrite them a third time like I had to do for chapter 9.

Strawpoll Link
That particular straw poll website seems to be broken. I tested it by selecting "no" but it didn't show the vote. I've also tested multiple other polls but none of them worked. So here's a link to one from a different website that I've tested and actually works. Strawpoll Link

Edit: Just so you're all aware, just because one version of the rewrite is already up doesn't mean it's too late to vote. I could easily edit what I wrote to change what happens. After all it's mainly only one small section I would need to alter.

Comments ( 2 )

Sure. If you want gerhardt to either erase his own memory or go insane

Nah man she keeps him grounded

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