My plans for the next chapter of Sacrifice · 7:39pm Oct 18th, 2020
Well, since I finished the latest update to the Showing His Place series with Date Night, I feel like now is as good a time as ever to take in requests for what to include in Sacrifice. I still have my two Patreon poll-winning stories I need to complete before November, so it'll likely be a couple weeks at most before I post a new chapter. But at the same time, I already have plans for how the layout for this chapter will go.
In chapter 16, I plan to have it set on the morning of Shining's big day: The Crystal Empire Formal. Shining and Sombra will have a heart-to-heart discussion on the balcony outside their bedroom, with the two each discussing their feelings on the matter of his incoming ceremony. Even though Shining is rightfully worried, Sombra would reassure him about his duties by complimenting his efforts, both as a Private and as the Empire's "Prince." Shining would still be apprehensive, but he wouldn't try to resist when Sombra suggests a few last-minute Orders before the formal is set to begin...
Now, this is just how the beginning of the chapter will go. I have a few other details that I plan to include, such as Shining's Dad Night Light arriving at the Crystal Empire to meet up with his (currently Ex) wife and son. Twilight the Elements would also be present for the event, so there's likely some good ideas to be implemented before the formal involving them~
Since this chapter will likely take a while before it's made, I'm not imposing any donation goals or time limits for this. All I'll say is if you have an idea worthy of including for this pre-formal chapter, feel free to donate to my PayPal link here: https://www.paypal.me/TheVClaw
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Sacrifice Chapter Suggestions:
1. [Supernorwegianfly ($75)] - Rarity learns of what happened to Shining's wedding suit; Cadance allows her to make Shining AND Sombra dress models with a written contract.
2. [Hollowblade ($100)] - Shining is ordered to tell Night Light the truth about everything, while Velvet coddles Sombra in front of him; also, Twilight confirms her status as a wife (and future Mother) as well.
3. [Spoonlol ($80)] - Night Light convinces Sombra to marry him as well, so that he can still be with Velvet too.
4. [Anonymous Donor ($70)] - In order to avoid any male competition, Sombra insists that Night Light be gelded as well~
5. [Luna Kamingo($65)] - Shining is fucked in the ass like a mare by Sombra (finally!~)
6. [Cold Blooded ($40.52)] - Luna confronts the three about their actions after seeing Shining's dream personally. She's not condemning them, but gives Sombra a strong warning that's he on thin ice.
Also as a quick reminder, DO NOT PLACE YOUR DETAILS IN THE PAYPAL NOTE. You can either PM me your idea, comment it below in this blogpost, or even message me about it privately on Discord. I'll be sure to list any and all details you have (excluding any details for those who wish to be anonymous) up above on the list. I'll also update this blogpost regularly, so don't be discouraged to donate at a later time if necessary. As I mentioned before, it'll likely be until November before I can write this chapter out.
Other than that, I hope y'all have a great day, and be sure to stay safe this Halloween season! I'll be celebrating my 30th birthday on the 25th, so be sure to send your best wishes then. Seeya!
UPDATE: I have officially began work on the chapter, so no new suggestions can be made for the Donation Pool. However, if you want to show your support, you can still donate to my Paypal here, or join my Official Patreon Page to see the story's progress: https://www.patreon.com/posts/43818440
Happy bday for the 25th dude, think I’ll wait out and see what other people come up with for this one. I got a couple ideas but they might be better for chapters later down the line as it were
Holy shit some of those prompts
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I just want to clarify right now, I have a plan set for how to write this without overstepping things. I promise, I know what I'm doing here.
Besides, we already came this far, haven't we?
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Trust me I’m not complaining, a major part of why I love this fic is because of how far it goes and it knows it’s limit. I’m almost tempted to try and put in another suggestion but I already have mine up there.
Well, didn’t see that coming
It's like a domino effect of people trying to undermine others' suggestions.
Edit: I don't know the legality behind how polygamy works but I'm not sure it works the way the third suggester thinks it does.
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If Sombra can have multiple wives then, with the assumption that the Crystal Empire is same-sex marriage friendly and it is legal (it would be weird if it weren't, yknow, Princess of love and all that yada yada), then there would be no legal problem whatsoever with Night Light becoming Sombras husband. A nice addition to the herd I would say.
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I get that, but with what I could find on polygamous marriages the wives, while all married to the husband, are not married to each other. If Sombra and Night got married it would not mean that Night would than also be married to Velvet again. Legally, he would just be another "wife".
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Yeah, he'll definitely be a "wife" alright~ 😈
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It could be more symbolic than literal, if Night can't be married to Velvet than He'll do the next best thing and join Sombra's harem so he can still be with her to some capacity.
Edit: Looking back, I guess I just assumed that's what you were going with when I only just now figured out what you actually ment.
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He's going to become a real "Man's man".
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Hehe nice
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Oops deleted that comment by mistake. But that’s kind what I was going for. Nightlight wanting to simply be a family again, and to add another inters layer to things
Are there currently any plans to have Shining fucked/made a wife himself? If not then I'll pitch in tomorrow if that's an option.
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I also vote on the idea of Shining joining the harem as a "wife" and getting railed so hard he won't walk straight for a week.
I hope Night Light gets fucked too.
I noticed that it says Sombra “insists” Night Light be gelded as well. May be some thing may be nothing
Just saw this blog and finally huh? We're you hoping it would happen too?
The next chapter is going to be amazing