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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Thursday
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 3 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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Oct
5th
2020

Nightmare Night Chapter 33 launches tonight · 2:15pm Oct 5th, 2020

Titled "Command Corruption", it's become a doozie, in the immortal words of Pinkie Pie :pinkiegasp:, and once again borrows heavily on AJ_Aficionado's too-good-not-to-use thestral lore as the Canterlot Castle Command Center is corrupted and converted, with all the M-rated action it implies.

The chapter currently contains two major scenes, though I'm considering bumping the second one to the next chapter as 1) we're already near 10,000 words and 2) the first scene is, to both me and AJA, more powerful, leaving the second one potentially anticlimactic. Without it, we'd still be approaching 7000 words long but it would let the stronger scene have the spotlight to itself. I'll make the decision by tonight.

It's also worth noting that I'm introducing two prereader/coauthor OCs to each other in this chapter--Lady Delta Requiem and High Priestess Juniper Neptune. The former belongs to Leo Archon, and the latter to AJA. At the suggestion of the former, some interesting backstory will be hinted at between the two!

If I bump the second scene, that just means the next chapter will follow in a matter of days to close out the Canterlot action. It will have a... suitable scene and ending, and even a sacrifice of sorts as Luna tests herself against the temptations she succumbed to in the past, and gets pushed to the very edge of it again. But before that? Enjoy the coming chapter, which should have something for everyone! :rainbowwild:

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I'm looking forward to reading it.

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