Well, this really should have been done before now · 2:38am Sep 26th, 2020
This story may be taken down in the near future
And probably tomorrow I'll explain why, and I'll finally be talking about how this story really offends me.
Yes, a rewrite is in the works, so if you did like the general premise, I'll be revisiting it and handling things way better than I did here.
Because I honestly don't know what i want to do with this account anymore. And I do still find myself enjoying creating content, so I think I'll just do what I've been doing.
Anyway, that 500 upvotes thing is coming tonight, and I'm gonna start on that as soon as this is posted so yeah.
Maybe grab some water and some lightly salted popcorn?
I liked it. Even though I'm against Twilight outliving her friends I'm good with her reuniting with them in death. I deleted a couple of mine cause I decided to rewrite and combine them into one story.
I just read your story "Legends" tonight.
This thing you put in the author's note
I don't think it's a piece of crap, you put your heart and soul into this and I honestly think it made me tear up a bit.
I can not put into words how much I loved this story, and this is coming from a guy who doesn't like the idea of a immortal Twilight.
I sincerely hope you don't delete it, because I really like it, I wish I could give it more than one like.
But if you really feel the need to rewrite it, maybe take out the part where she kills herself and have it like the video remembrance, but have her pass on.
Though the ending is ambiguous enough for interrupation.
There were a few missing words in sentences, but that is basically my only complaint.
The story is good and so is the feeling. I hope you consider keeping this, because like I said, I can tell you put your heart and soul into this, and for that it ain't a piece of crap
I'll admit, I am curious as to why the story offends you though
Although, if you decide you might want to rewrite this, I do have an idea for a title for you.
"The difference between myths and legends"