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Mocha Star


I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.

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    Past two weeks

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Jul
30th
2020

Real book title help · 8:06pm Jul 30th, 2020

So, as you may recall, I am gonna write my ex's affair that grew to divorce and polygamy into a book; can you offer a title?

Winner get a 2,000 word commission; free.

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Comments ( 18 )

Polygamizer? I 'ardly knew 'er!

Love: What is it Good for? (Absolutely Nothing)

One Step Over the Edge?

How about

Affair to Polygamy: One man's experience.

The one I thought I knew:
A story of love, heartbreak and new beginnings.

Fickle Hearts.

Rickety Relations

More Than A Pair

Loving Traces

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Best one yet.
Leave it to the most real guy, huh?

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Good ideas for chapter titles!

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Thanks. I the best I can. You've certainly been through a lot. It's inspiring to see that you are positive and always moving forward.

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Clever wordplay is a hobby of mine.

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Very rough draft of Chapter One.

This is gonna be about 12 chapters long, and I'll be adding in a lot more detail as the drafts go on, so about 40% more to this chapter.
Thoughts?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K6viOBPa-ztHj_uh1b4oBg6W0CtFqSwl7f24ETe_Njw/edit?usp=sharing

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That is just unimaginable! I can't understand why she would put her children in danger or continue being friends with this couple, except that she was attracted to having a sexual relationship with them. She obviously had no concern for you or your children.

Good description of events, though to show how things progressed, you might tell how your relationship with her was before she became involved with the other couple. How did she met them? How was your relationship at the time? Just a couple of things I was wondering while I read through this.

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Good point. This is a draft, so I'll add that in as I go.

Mind you, I'm only covering two out of 26 months thus far.
The future months are much more entertaining.

Chaotic evolution.

... I got nothing.

"Marking Buried Hatchets"

"A Heartache's Escape"

"Love, Lust & Betrayal"

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